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I mainly love writing anime inspired stories. So I am really glad I found this platform
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Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

I hope you now see from my perspective why I really wanted to keep that beach arc. Because without it, Maria's dialogue here wouldn't have carried much weight. We wouldn't have seen Mary spend any real time with her.

Minimo's magic would have also come out of nowhere. And the general bonding between all of the girls wouldn't have really felt complete if Mary hadn't spent time with at least a good chunk of them.

And yes, it was a little challenging, but I made sure to keep every single girl relevant to the climax because they all spent genuine bonding time with Mary.

This is why the beach arc is one of my favorite arcs, haha. Because it truly embodies the peaceful life Mary wants and has been fighting for.

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:44

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

yeah, I completely understand. that's why I also made sure to keep the reader knowing everything that was happening in her head every step of the way

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:42

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

I'm sure they feel safe with giant Mr Kitty

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:41

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

yeah, Mary was just focused on becoming strong enough to become the demon Queen, so she can change her people for the better. not knowing that in the process, she was accidentally neglecting someone who loved her so dearly.

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:39

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

very correct
now in order to defeat evil, she must become the one thing she has been avoiding since the start of the story

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:39

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

I'm glad you really connected with the chapter. and yes, this is where some of those beach ark stuff begin to pay off

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:38

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

the best Mr Kitty

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:38

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

pay off time lol

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:36

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

she is practically giving Mary no other option, even though she really doesn't want to hurt her little sister

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:35

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

she does have that aspect as well
the both of them are of the same blood

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:35

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

she will definitely come help out

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:34

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

not even close poor girl

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:33

Oct 07, 2026

To:Momo Stella

yeah, that's why she's struggling with herself to not act on instinct right now

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:31

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

yes, now let's just hope she gets the space and time to talk to them

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:30

Oct 07, 2026

To:Jen_F

miss Hilda is always stressing the poor girl out

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:28