May 22, 2025
Honestly, I don't even know where to start.
Moon, this was a beautiful emotional peace. The story, the characters, the lore, the world building. Every part was crafted with absolute tender and care. Especially our two main protagonists. Although to be fair, at the start of the story I more connected with Gretel than I did the sorcerer. But by the middle and at the end, when bit by bit things about them were revealed, I just wanted to continue reading about their adventures together. The ending I think was handled absolutely beautifully.
Congratulations on finishing. Writing is not easy. Thank you for sharing your story with the community. I hope you continue to share more whenever you have the time.
