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Jan 15, 2025

I really like how you used those first two chapters to calmly set the stage for what happens next. I’ll continue reading the following chapters and find out more about Ezri :)))

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:1

Jan 13, 2025

To:_Caity_

No, you’re wrong, nothing bad will happen at all! :p
Thank you so much for your comment! 😊

The Drift of Time

Chapter:1

Jan 09, 2025

I'm always amazed by the universe you create every time, killer details everywhere, but it works amazingly.
Personally, Oshi no Ko Season 1 is one of my favorite anime (especially because of that killer Episode 1 that gives you chills), even if the stick dance wasn't one of my favorite scenes—it works very well here!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:6

Jan 08, 2025

Another great chapter, I really like the concept of the Mongolian death worms as holographic attractions, very nice ! The immersion is really good, you start and can’t stop. Eager to read the next one!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:5

Jan 07, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Haha, that’s such a fun origin for the selfie stick
love how even small details can have such unexpected inspirations! And now that you mention it, I can totally see the Super Smash Bros influence with the clothing updates; it’s such a clever way to blend something familiar with this futuristic setting. I’m really looking forward to seeing what’s beyond the “tutorial area” now it feels like the story’s about to kick into high gear, and I can’t wait to see how Hana handles what’s coming next. Keep up the great work! 😊

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:4

Jan 07, 2025

To:kazesenken

Anyway, I think this chapter is very well done. I will continue reading the following chapters with pleasure :)

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter delivers a great mix of suspense and clever strategy! The protagonist's resourcefulness shines through as they navigate the high-stakes environment. The pacing keeps the tension alive, especially with the intriguing setup of the museum and its hidden secrets. I also enjoyed how their internal thoughts add layers to their character—balancing wit and determination. Excited to see what they'll uncover next! 🎯

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:2

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter is such a wild ride! The concept of enforcement droids and their absurdly strict rules is both hilarious and terrifying. Kojiro's determination to fight back against this oppressive system, especially for the sake of his relationship with Kurumi, adds a lot of heart and relatability to the story. The creative loophole he finds in the programming is a clever and satisfying twist! I'm curious to see how far he'll go in his "declaration of war"—the stakes feel personal yet larger than life. Great work balancing humor with meaningful commentary! 😊

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter does a great job highlighting Cumhail’s struggles and his resilience despite everything. Nyohah’s intervention was a nice touch, adding hope to an otherwise tense moment. The relationship between Cumhail and Marce feels genuine and heartfelt, and the supernatural twist at the end is intriguing—I’m curious to see how it unfolds. Solid work, keep it up!

Mirror Arm

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2025

Randy’s optimism and energy are such a delight! This chapter had me laughing as the brothers navigated the bureaucratic chaos of starting their business in space. The quirky dialogue and creative world-building make the story so enjoyable—I can’t wait to see what wild plan Randy has in store next! 🚀

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:2

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter was a whirlwind of tension and action! Axel's desperation and the high-stakes confrontation with the girl were gripping—her cold precision and his relentless determination make for such a compelling dynamic. The hints about CryoCore's experiments add layers of intrigue, and the vivid fight sequences kept me on edge. The pacing is fantastic, and the mix of mystery and danger is spot-on. I'm eager to uncover more about her backstory and how it ties into Axel's world. Amazing work—can't wait for the next chapter! ⚙️🌊

Shiro and the Iron Whale

Chapter:3

Jan 07, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thanks for the great feedback! I’ve removed the 'POV Lucy' part as you suggested—it does feel smoother now. Appreciate your input! 🙌

The Drift of Time

Chapter:2

Jan 07, 2025

I’m really enjoying how the story continues to mix futuristic tech with heartfelt nostalgia! Hana’s perspective gives such a warm and relatable feel to this advanced world. The idea of nano linen and personalized clothing updates is both fascinating and fun, and the inclusion of a selfie stick—of all things—made me smile. The dynamic between Irina and Selena keeps things light yet engaging. I’m excited to see where the journey takes Hana next!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:4

Jan 07, 2025

Another great chapter! Stella’s personality continues to shine, and her interactions with the man are just the right mix of humor and vulnerability. I love how the dialogue subtly explores deeper themes like identity and autonomy without losing the story’s playful tone. The Moon setting and the controlled environment add such a fascinating layer to the narrative—it makes me curious about what’s next for Stella. Keep up the great work! 🚀✨

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:2

Jan 07, 2025

Chapter 2 adds a delightful mix of humor and heart to the futuristic setting! I loved seeing Ash's vulnerability as he grapples with ambition and relationships—his dynamic with Neon feels natural and engaging. The world-building continues to shine, though some transitions could flow a bit more smoothly. Overall, this chapter is a great follow-up, keeping the charm alive while deepening the emotional stakes. Can't wait to see how Ash's journey unfolds!

Red Pretender

Chapter:2

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