Jan 02, 2025
To:lolitroy
Hi Lolittroy! Thanks for your questionâgreat eye for detail! The bolded sections in chapters 1 and 2 were intended to create a structured flow within the narrative, helping to break down key moments into digestible parts. These sections highlight shifts in tone or setting, drawing attention to the growing tension in the story as the stakes build.
In chapter 3, as the action ramps up, i decided to weave these transitions more fluidly into the prose itself, which is why youâll notice fewer explicitly bolded segments. The aim was to make the pacing align more dynamically with the unfolding events. Let us know how you feel about that changeâfeedback like yours really helps us refine the storytelling! đ
