Aug 11, 2025
To:Moon
Green skin sorry..no idea how i made this mistake and didn't spotted it in editing. She is an elf
Honestly i wasn't sure about this part. I envisioned this scene as a way of showing how normal people see her, and
passage about Selene supposed to serve as a reference for Rina to how people see her
Maybe i cut this scene too much, not really sure..or maybe i didn't managed to focus well enough on what i wanted to show in this scene...?
In the end my wife preferred sorter version as the long one had too much explicit info dump and was taking this scene in very different direction than i wanted so i went with this version in the end...
I don't like to retcon anything that i published already so i will keep it as it is and with some hope other chapters will be better than this one
