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I'm just a nerd that thinks reading is one of the most wonderful things in this world. If my stories can resonate with people, I will be happy.
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May 01, 2025
And Kenji's dad is being a jerk again, no big surprise, but a disappointment nonetheless 🫠 I believe in Kenji and Airi though! Even if they don't make it work, they'll definitely do their best 😭
Aw, Airi is so adorable!!! I love her passion and brightness, and her idealism shines through so well 🥰
The tension is really amping up now Kudos to both of them though. Despite the rather big revelation, they're handling this maturely enough. (Also, I really love how you're characterizing Airi, especially the whisper shout! 😭)
Aaw, that was so cute!! But darn it, I wanted to see more 😭
Ren's internal growth is understated at times but easily seen in her internal thoughts. I really love how she's processing things ☺️
This cat is an interesting character. I rather like how you approached his different facets here, even if he's meddling in bad faith 🤔
Curious. I really have to admire Ren here though as she struggles with her thoughts. She's definitely a driven girl.
Cat... what are you doing? 🤨
Ren's drive is very raw. I love how you've internalized her. She really does sound like a brash twenty year old who's had her whole world turned upside down.
The snark from the cat is great! Almost reminds me of if Jiji from Kiki's Delivery Service had a gruffer uncle ☺️
Yes, another story from the amazing Mara! I'm already excited by how beautifully you've set up the scene. I look forward to seeing where this goes! 🥰
Apr 30, 2025
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Good question marks! Sorry, should've specified better😭 I just really want to learn more about this world!
Apr 29, 2025
Lot of question marks about what's going on here, but I'm really happy for Elisabeth as she learns more about this world and arms herself with knowledge. I'm just as curious about things as she is. I must know more!
I feel so giddy for Elisabeth as she navigates her feelings and explores her capabilities. This is so cute! And I love her and Finley's interactions! 😭
On another note, she now has an in-universe fanclub to go with her out-of-universe one 🥰
The introspection here was very well delivered. I loved Elisabeth's thoughts, realizations, and eventual conclusions. It flows so well and makes her that much more lovable😭
Also, I stan Marie, bestest maid and wingwoman in the world!