Feb 15, 2025

Meredith’s frustration is palpable, and it's so refreshing to see a character who isn’t afraid to speak the truth, even if it means confronting her brother. Her insight into Sheer’s manipulative nature gives her character so much depth, and I’m hoping she becomes a key player in the story.

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Feb 15, 2025

I loved how Bonnie quickly picked up on the uncomfortable situation with the guard. Her sharp wit adds a nice balance to Tum’s impulsiveness and Buckle’s caution. The trio is definitely an interesting mix, and I’m excited to see how their teamwork will unfold as they get deeper into this royal mess.

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Feb 15, 2025

I’m impressed by how Tum navigates the situation with the princess. The way he spun the story about avoiding crowds and hiding his identity feels like it’s straight out of a seasoned thief’s playbook. What a brilliant escape plan!

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Feb 15, 2025

This chapter does a fantastic job of balancing adventure, tension, and political intrigue.

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Feb 15, 2025

Quil is such a fascinating character! I love that he's an artist living in a cave, completely unconcerned with societal expectations. The description of his mismatched features is also hilarious. "A respectable artist living in a cave. Very respectable." I laughed so hard at this.

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Feb 15, 2025

This chapter does a great job of highlighting the inequalities in their world and adds depth to the theme of class struggle.

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Feb 15, 2025

I love how the chapter explores the theme of legacy. Harodin’s desire to break free from his father’s shadow and create his own path is both inspiring and heartbreaking. His decision to release the peasants shows a glimmer of hope for his reign.

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Feb 15, 2025

What a strong beginning! I appreciated the attention to detail in describing the setting, especially the imagery of the worn leather on the horse's seat. It provides a gritty, realistic backdrop for the story and hints at the hardships the characters may have faced. It's a fantastic way to ground the fantasy elements. well done!

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Feb 14, 2025

That news feed reveal at the end is a killer cliffhanger! Noa holding Donna hostage? I didn't see that coming. Great twist!

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Feb 14, 2025

The mystery man's rooftop monologue is intriguing. What's his connection to Tamara? Great writing!

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Feb 14, 2025

Wow... the tension here is thick! Fuyuhiro’s condition and Noa’s spiraling are Interesting. Donna’s cold interaction with Roy suggests we’re in for a complex power struggle ahead.

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Feb 14, 2025

Why I feeling that this is just the beginning of the chaos.?

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Feb 14, 2025

Dex’s concern for Noa feels genuine, but I wonder what he’s really hiding.

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Feb 14, 2025

The opening sets a dark yet hopeful tone for the world where even despair has a safety net.

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Feb 14, 2025

The idea of storing consciousness on a chip is fascinating but unsettling. It makes me wonder 🤔 do they truly preserve humanity, or just a hollow version of it?

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