Sep 17, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Well said! 💘

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

He didn't mean to, but he kinda did.

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

She's somewhat an exception, so there's no rule for her. If there was, Azel would have used it to get her out now that he believes her. But since there isn't and Azel isn't bending or breaking them, she's stuck 💦

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Guess he ended up being kind of well-meaning. 😭

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Kuro

Glad the tension came through well! Thank you!

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Thank goodness! Otherwise you'd miss out on pizza and fries... and pasta...

You're too kind! *^_^*

'Quite a bit' sounds exciting! Would love to read them all when you're ready to share! ❤️

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Sep 17, 2025

Oh, COOL chapter!! 🤩

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Sep 17, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Oh, I don't even know what these rankings mean! But considering Iori has a ranking of 400, you're pretty good!

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Sep 16, 2025

Nice first chapter! Very intriguing! Could use a bit more of formatting/editing, though; especially when it comes to line breaks. That simple small effort would enhance the reading experience tenfold.

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Sep 16, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Yep, now we know that there was something deeper going on all this time. 💗

Okay, in defence of Azel, he isn't bad per se, just kind of rigid. But it can be frustrating 😭

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Sep 16, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Thank YOU! 💗

No, don't be sorry! They're not the confusing sorts of questions; they're the fun let's-turn-to-the-next-page questions! 💗

Oh, so Ruru is from Rules of... it's a nickname!
And Katou is both in the game and in the real world?! How? What is going on!?! 💗

LOVE the personalised novel part!! 🤩 THANK YOU! Hehe! Guess I'll have to read more to unravel the mystery! ❤️

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Sep 16, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Glad you like him, hehe.

Guess it happens. I, on the other hand, absolutely love tomatoes – always have! It's funny if you like ketchup and tomato sauce but not tomatoes LOL😆

That novel was just a fun little sci-fi thing I wrote for the previous contest. Not my usual style (whatever that is), but I had fun doing it! 😄 Have you written elsewhere? I'd love to read anything else of yours!
Sincerely, your fan! ❤️

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Sep 16, 2025

Wow, I liked this chapter so much! BUT!
1. Is Aria Ruru??!
2. Katou as a prince even, speaks like himself! How? Is this really a game? Or an alternative reality?

Also, I love him so much! And that 'people who don't finish their sentences had me laughing like CRAZY! 🤣🤣🤣 I need to try this out on someone LOL!

I've said it before and I'll say it again: you're an amazing writer! ❤️

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Sep 16, 2025

I can read a whole book on Kael and Wolfe alone LOL! 🤣Reluctant team and endless teasing – and secret admiration 🤭❤️❤️❤️

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Sep 16, 2025

Loved the two-move game! You must be really good at chess, Mario! I wish I could play with you – but then, I'd better not, actually 😱🙇‍♀️

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