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May 25, 2025
Finally. This was another beautiful chapter. It was a very personal moment for both of them. You captured it well.
I love it. She finally said her poem. I am sure Eva understood the poem more than Rae did. I think that you catch the awkwardness of situations well.
I am enjoying Rea’s internal dialogue. Also, I think the you have captured the overall mood of the space station well, especially the boredom and the interaction of people who are used to having each other around.
She finally got her nails painted.
To:Mara
She is making progress as she always does. But she has to still answer the question of, "Who am I?"
I know. This was one of my first stories and I was focusing more on here acceptance of what happened more than the mystery part of it. I promise what is on it will be revealed. at least partially.
I think that that is one of the main existential questions Jess needs to answer. An Kevin is good guy. He can be jerk sometimes, but he is overall a good guy.
Check another one of the list. Way to go.
I truly understand. I totally get your character. Rea is a wonderful character, and I get what you were going for. I only mentioned it because so many in the comments before could not see it.
Grief is a very difficult thing to process, but this chapter ends with hope.
May 24, 2025
This story is different than your other stories. at the same time it is Uniquely you. I like how Rea is trying to process something she doesn’t understand. She is obsessed with it almost to the point of risking her safety. I like her.
I think her understanding of her feelings is moving at an appropriate pace. Also the idea that robots and androids designed to work close to and look like humans gaining human emotions, or something like them has been hypothesized. Thank you for taking me on her journey.
I am enjoying reading this. An android that is nearly human makes for an interesting story. I have always wanted to write one about an android that is designed to mimic humans. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. Rea is showing signs of adapting human behavior and feeling. that you mentioned that there is an android culture implies that these types of androids are free in this society. That to me is interesting. In a way Rea is similar to. R. Daneel Olivaw from Asimov’s robot and foundation stories. In that regard I am definitely interested in how she evolves.
I am enjoying the story so far. I look forward to see where it goes.
Wow. What a bunch of jerks. I hope she will be okay after that comment.