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Howdy! I just enjoy writing what I write. I hope you enjoy it too.
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Sep 13, 2025
Sorry, it happened again. "I eye her, accessing her health." should be, "I eye her, assessing her health."
This is... very very sad... 😭I feel like I should read more but it's just too depressing for me. 😭
The word is assess, not access. "I close the door behind me, and access the situation." should be, "I close the door behind me, and assess the situation."
Also... no one can catch a break can they? 😭
Sep 12, 2025
"He lost the feeling on his legs...", should be, "He lost the feeling in his legs..." 🤓
Sep 03, 2025
To:Mai
I fixed it finally! Thank you again for pointing that out.
Aug 29, 2025
Thank you for the feedback! I think I improve on that later, should really look at these chapters again.
Please do use it for that character! 😆
Thank you! I'm glad it reads well.
Aug 24, 2025
Interesting, love the break into Midori's thoughts of her past in particular.
To:TheWriteKC
Thank you very much!
Aug 17, 2025
To:Fragment
Thank you! I never know if I'm being too subtle or too blunt.
Aug 03, 2025
To:Gurg
You had me in the first half. 😜
Thank you!
Jul 30, 2025
She do be a lion of dandy. 😆
Jul 29, 2025
Indeed, may they be blessed with horrors and humor both. (I think, never done a blessing before. 😆)
And thusly, the dame has arrived.