May 13, 2025

To:improv1sed

Considering how far I've read, I definitely have reached the part of the novel, past the introduction and initial world establishment.
The fantasy politics up to this point have been wonderfully established, and I'm quite glad that it's dealt with in this specific way. Because establishing world building in this "easy to digest" way, makes it a lot more enjoyable to read! ❤️

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May 13, 2025

To:improv1sed

It is my favourite way of consuming media / literature. What point is there to reading if there is naught to think about?

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May 13, 2025

To:improv1sed

As stated previously, I am simply pointing out my thoughts and theories as the story progresses. Whenever I read good literature I attempt to take it all in by taking notes, speaking out my thoughts, for argument's sake, leaving comment's. I'm quite glad you consider my comment's as touching, because I try to make them as thorough as humanely possible without writing my own novel. ❤️

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May 13, 2025

To:improv1sed

You most certainly hit the mark on that! I feel as though, as for Media, this is certainly straightforward to approach. The Isekai premise and the style of writing at hand truly to go hand in hand here to make this work.
Also there's no need to thank me, I'm simply expressing my thoughts

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May 12, 2025

It is quite funny to see the classic stereotypical gender roles being switched between Diana and Finley. Even more intriguing is to see how strongly Margot seems to be against magic, even declining Finley's offer to help with having Elisabeth sleep, despite her definitely needing sleep more than anything after an exhausting encounter such as that one with the "Dubhiast".

As other commenters have said, it is also quite wonderful to see Elisabeth slowly adjust to her new reality, and more so have her be a realistic depiction of someone in a similar situation, slipping in and out of a casual-talking-style!

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May 12, 2025

I am highly interested in the direction of the Novel further on. It seems, with how Diana and Finley have been described, that these two will be the actual love interests of Elisabeth, which is interesting considering she has been (and is) swearing up and down about her being "straight", whatever that means in this predicament.
I personally can say, if I had been in Elisabeth's Situation, I would have been a flustered mess.

Also to mention, it is quite interesting to see that most (most in this case being the ones we knows are from this reality) of the charakters we have met up until this focus point in the story, seem to be against the use of Magic, while Diana and Finley, seem to be openly wielding it, like it's something they are proud of.

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May 12, 2025

I first wish to point out, how perfectly descriptive this chapter has been, to a point in which I am almost watching this whole fight occur like a movie in my head.
Other than that however, I was quite surprised to see french, "mauvais", in the novel. I want to specifically say, that's not a bad thing, and I like that the meaning of it becomes clear even if you aren't proficient in the french language.
Finley and Diana seem like a really fun Duo of new Charakters, and I can not wait to learn more about the two of them.

also "She's mine" is an awesome introduction for whoever is saying it.

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May 12, 2025

It is intriguing how descriptive the Scourge were introduced, and innately makes me wonder rather or not these will be returning charakter's (if so I would love a visual presentation in a printed out copy of this story) but more importantly how Elisabeth reacts to these. Presuming she retains her memories from her "previous life", seeing these Monsters in her reality must be horrifying, considering she most likely would have seen media depicting similar monsters as mass destruction units, so I am not surprised to see her accept her impending doom so eagerly.
I am interested how this ends up fanning out, and how the unfamiliar faces plan to slay this Beast.

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May 12, 2025

Honestly I adore that Elisabeth went from "oh i'm a woman" in a perplexed way to "oh I'm a woman" in a more self accepting and honestly kind of happy way? From what I can gather, she truly does seem to enjoy her "new self" which makes me happy to experience. I can not lie, I smiled for the initial half of the chapter.
Marie and Elisabeth's Dynamic truly is starting to blossom greatly, and I adore every moment of it! Marie seems to be fanning out to become one of my favourite charakters.

The fact that even Elisabeth's mother was betrothed and force-married into her position is a little heartbreaking, especially because I had hoped she would help and step in. Though realistic.

I can not wait to read more!

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May 12, 2025

The sternness of the King, being realistic to ones in a Monarchy back in older times, where a Princess gets less than a say over who they wish to marry, and who they don't.
I usually am not the biggest fan of political conversations or themes, however in this novel they are relayed to you in a sensitive way, in which it doesn't get overwhelming, and does not feel like it is forced upon you. Which I really appreciate, especially in current times.

I truly do feel for Elisabeth, and I really hope that throughout the span of the Novel, either the Deighsel-Party becomes redeemable or the King changes his views on... well quite honestly, Everything.

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May 12, 2025

I absolutely adored the "dude, this stew is amazing" joke, I would be lying if I said I didn't release an audible laugh because of it.
My favourite Scene must have been Marie's coughing, as it showed how truly helpless Elisabeth would be in this "new world" without some structure, someone or something too lean onto, and in this case that is Marie.
I love a story with well written Dynamics, and I am looking forward to seeing the one between Marie and Elisabeth fan out even further ❤️

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May 12, 2025

I adore how we, as in the readers, are almost immediately made aware of Elisabeth's feelings about being betrothed to a man, letalone one of this caliber. Especially after the observation's Elisabeth has made, I think most everyone would dread being betrothed to this man, so the Deighselian Duke being equally as creepy, truly makes me empathize with Elisabeth.
I also wish to point out the wording in this chapter me exceptionally good. Not a sentence sounds similar to the last, and I appreciate that quite a lot!

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May 12, 2025

I really like the way that desription's are done, the way that Elisabeth specifically, and later, her surroundings are described. It's detailed in a really nice way, so I can visually imagine it.
I think most everyone would catch a long deep breath, after realising they have turned from a Man to a Woman. I specifically enjoy that it's written in a positive lighting, and with the knowledge I have procured about this Novel, I can assume why.
I enjoyed this chapter, and am interested to read more

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May 12, 2025

Despite being a classic Isekai premise, this seems specifically interesting not only due to the Streamer twist put onto it. But assuming that the Main Charakter has turned into the "beautiful woman", also can throw some interesting questions into the mix, and I'm interested to read and learn more.

I really enjoy the writing style, it's not, not casual, but also does not feel like I am reading a fanfiction online. Not using complicated wording in a way that it makes it hard to read either, which makes it easy for someone like me, whose first language isn't english, to read and understand the premise.
If this was already printed, I doubt I could tell the difference between a book written by a renowned author, and your work.

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