Sep 03, 2025
To:Darkholis
Oh, wow. Thanks for the feedback!
I honestly didn't know it would break the immersion. I was thinking about putting some intro but it didn't come into my mind as much. I was too concerned by the fact that this novel mostly uses zoom-in technique with fast-paced to-the-point.
But yeah, thanks for the input! I'll revise it for a bit.