Sep 11, 2025
4000 years of Chinease Bullshit baby🤣.
The idea of something that should be dead but isn't, of a Chinease material arts clans, surrounded by a city of smog and steel, is pretty neat. I find it interesting that as a kid he doesn't quite see the irony of appreicating the flower but not the ancient poetry. I dunno, somen about that idea of the material artist is the future or even out present, so out of time but sort of universally 'true', the aestetic of it is indeed worthy Mr Mo🔥🙌.
Honestly a part of me prefers just that little bit, that little vision, instead of having a full backstory extract in the middle of the fight it'd also make him match more woth Filly brief glimpse last chapter📝🤔.
That said I do like the backstory, its kinda cute😎.
I think maybe you should dwell on the end of the fight slightly more, like just more detail of the impact, of the atmosphere and hushed crowd - maybe cut the chapter there and have the kings awenkening and the draw annocement be their own dedicated bit next chapter - just to let the moments breath some more - cuase honestly these are banger moments🔥, no reason to compress them🙌