Sep 03, 2025
I wonder if the time mages had any connection with the Volpe given their settlements both being so northerly.
I really like you making the Raffy the fox, it adds a little something extra to him and well, the tempattion would be fox girl, so i respect fox man😆😎.
I will say, a couple extra lines about the village would not be amiss, just cuase its sounds like a neat place. A different speicies, a culture more dependant on magic, up in the chilly north - maybe a couple lines about the snow on the rooftops, or perhaps about how the buildings differ from those of the human capital - just to really solidify the reader's mental image of the town and make it all the more memorable as their last rest stop before facing the all important clockenspiel😎🙏👍.
Hotspring time? A hotspring respet on the frontier of the desolate north, how very picturesque 👀. I think the book has painted a decent little fantasy world - I wouldn't say locations are its focus but their journey has had a nice amount of distinct places along the way which I like alot❤️.
Some nice Gideon introspection and group dynamics growing to top it all off😎 - Very nice chapter🔥