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Sep 02, 2025

I like the fight, it ramps up fast and is fairly easy to visual🔥 - I do have two lil qualms. A description of Alex again would be good, I don't rewlly rmember the last one whenever that was so kinda hard to picture her😆.

And then Uriel I think could use maybe one or two more moments before this? You defo showed her being firendly twice before, but I think one more interaction would be good to really sell her actively fighting on Endo's side here👍👍.

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:20

Sep 02, 2025

Magellon feels like a worrying thing to mention as Gideon explains👀🥲. I like the irl mention tho, I think the idea an isekai protag would relate to am irl adventurer is neat.

I think that and Roze's monolougue got me wondering about the 'after', weather the whole world rewinds with Gideon, or if they countinue on after he disapears.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:20

Sep 02, 2025

A little more of the positioning would be nice for the fighting I think, kind of hard to picture there distance from one another kindq thing📝🙌.

Kai being the most paniced is nice, the biggest guy being the most scared is a classic😆😎

Saga of the Three Warriors

Chapter:6

Sep 02, 2025

We have a team🎉. I appreicate the realitive expedience, its nice to have a party up and going early in the novel😊.

I get the impression demon queen is probs as untrusting as protag is behind her nice words😉🔥

Phished to Another World?!—I Was Supposed to Kill the Demon Queen, but Instead I Converted her to a Fake Priestess

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

I quite like the idea 100 years have passed, weather thats cusse the servers were ticking over in some capacity, or that this is a genuine alt world as he hypothesis - it has a ring of those dead mmo servers, or empty minecraft servers you sometimes see people make youtube videos and args about exploring, world's left abandoned, subliminally empty even🔥😎.

I will say there walk could desperately do with some body language, maybe the odd mention of the uneven terrain below or whathave you, a wolf howl in the distance far behind them - just to remind us they are moving as they talk💪👍

Phished to Another World?!—I Was Supposed to Kill the Demon Queen, but Instead I Converted her to a Fake Priestess

Chapter:2

Sep 02, 2025

Oh-ho, pink haired mage who can't cast basic spells ref eh? This is either something new making me look old with my following guess - orrrrrrr - you too have great taste 😆 - Zero No Tsukimes Louise!!

Well that aside, I quite like Piper, she's not had toooo much to do but she's got a really strong sense of precense and characterisation😎🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:18

Sep 02, 2025

The little outburst about lasy sleepers was very fun, I like the more comically flustered in amongst all the more serious flusterings he gets from demons and the like😆🙌

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:17

Sep 02, 2025

I think Martha being a nun was a really clever choice - it both makes her more suseptible to believing everything, but also likely to, well as she did, cry out demon😆😎🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:16

Sep 01, 2025

You should not be allowed to dicatate your own titles🤣😆.

Enchanment is neat. The comedy is strong with this one, that it is😆😎

Time and Time Again

Chapter:18

Sep 01, 2025

Ya they screwed🤣😔

Saga of the Three Warriors

Chapter:4

Sep 01, 2025

I wonder if Saga being named Saga when the word saga is also in the title, is of improtance?📝

A smile💀, istg if i had a nickle for every slime in a contest isekai entry, grrrr....

One helmet being older seems dangerous given the isekai nature, amma mark that as a checkovs helmet right there😆

Saga of the Three Warriors

Chapter:2

Sep 01, 2025

Tragic guy C, parents died writing his birth certificate, he'll never know what the rest of his name was meant to be - Cyril, Cessor, Chris? - The dead don't speak😔😆

Saga of the Three Warriors

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

To:kazesenken

In Lila's case she may be far more mundane then that, who knows👀📝.
But the devs defo enjoying leaving extra code in that's for sure😆, who knows what might trigger by accident indeed💯😉

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:20

Sep 01, 2025

To:kazesenken

That does sound peak damn👀👀😄🔥

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:17

Aug 31, 2025

Those two boys are stubborn, give em that😎😆

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:26

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