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Nov 19, 2025

Enjoy you're new home Kairo!

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:71

Nov 18, 2025

Congrats on finals!😎🙌

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Chapter:42

Nov 17, 2025

To:Taylor J

Happy to obligue, was a fun read!❤️🔥

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Chapter:42

Nov 02, 2025

To:Taylor J

They're not messing around!😎😆

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:23

Oct 21, 2025

To:Taylor J

It most certainly is🔥❤️

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:21

Oct 12, 2025

Ok I love this one🤣 but I think it'd be better as the second last chapter, would act as a buffer between Teny leaving and returning and in general the chapter prior felt like more of an ending🙌👍.

And that's the end! I think that was the last on my list of contest books to finish too🔥👀.

Overall I think it can be a bit loose at times, reveals and developments often felt a little flat for me, a bit to 'casual' if that makes sense. I also think we strayed a bit from really being isekai😆, its more sorta sci-fi by the end, most game-world isekai make game jokes and stuff yes, but they're still about living in a new world, I never really feel like Ray is living in a new world, less and less until the end I think forgot a couple times I was in fact reading an isekai😆.
For positivites I think it fits comfortably in that mode of fluffy, pleasent light novels that are nice and cozy to read, lil adventure you can settle into quite happily😎. I also think hour sense of voice was very strong, I'd say and Ray and Rose are likely two of the most distinct PoV voices in the comp🔥.

Thanks for writing😎🎉, good luck!

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Chapter:42

Oct 12, 2025

Banzai! Things certainly worked out for them in the end, I think thats sweet😎.

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Chapter:41

Oct 12, 2025

Some o7 in chat for Teny

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Chapter:40

Oct 12, 2025

Holy moly XD

I do feel theres some confusing bits here, or atleast bits that feel glossy🤔👍. I thought the Devs were faciliatating the smart Ai to create the fancy NPCs, but then this chapter says they are what is making full dive work - but then chicken and the egg would ask what came first, the full dive or the devs making the full dive work😆.

Mallary was the big bad but she was also in Trogens cell? That bit kinda confusing. Is the chain of events that Trojun appeared, bugging stuff out > Mallary used Crow to find him > Trojun impressoned her - meanwhile virus Pual came about how📝👀 > then Trojun is beat and Mallery hires him to guard her castle? I think I get lost in the suace of all that at some point😆.

Likewise, Mqllary mentions finding a way to not need a controller when full diving but doesn't say what that way is, nor does that answer how Teny let Rose do much the same📝.

Ray not letting him slap her is correct of course😎, but geez mqn, no need to punch the poor guy🤣.

Teny is god?!😆🔥

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Chapter:39

Oct 11, 2025

Was not expecting the flashback emoji of clock!😆 but quite worth it, very cute, enjoyed this one greatly🔥

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Chapter:38

Oct 11, 2025

Tos nice to have Zorro back😎. His 'reveal' does feel a bit causual in a way, honestly alot of the reveals kinda do just feel like reveals cuase mystery need reveals if that makes sense? Not a killer issue just how I felt learning the various things of late👍.

Twitch chat is quite fun😆😎

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Chapter:36

Oct 11, 2025

Seem the obvious question bout Ray needing a control has already been asked📝🤔

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Chapter:34

Oct 09, 2025

Sadge Rose🥲🥲

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Chapter:33

Oct 08, 2025

Holy moly the xbox pro rep Rose in the house boys!😆

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Chapter:29

Oct 08, 2025

Rose wanting to sue is funny XD.

Good chapter for her in general🌹

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Chapter:28

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