Nov 26, 2025
Zero two😭. That was the best chapter I've read so far, and I love the fact that it's not over 2000 words, the characters are so charming and real, I wish the little girl was a part of the main cast cuz her dynamic with Haruki is wonderful. Dude you didn't break the fourth wall, you obliterated it🤣. Haruki is an awesome MC, he's pretty funny 😁. His mom is really nice, I like her ufufu's. That ending was diabolical. Hurry up and drop the next chapter ASAP, or else🤣.
Here is an overall rating:
Introduction: 8.6-10
Story: 8.8-10
Characters dynamics: 9.5-10
Plot: 9.3-10
Plot twists: 9.8-10
MC: 9.0-10
Side Characters: 9.1-10
Ending: 9.9-10
Overall: 9.0-10 [Amazing chapter, hands down]