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Hello I'm Chris Zee, I'm an Otaku who loves isekai, romance, slice of life, action etc... I also like writing and reading.
Oh and if you're interested in my story give it a read. (◠‿◕)
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Oct 25, 2025
To:Echoblue
Did it make you sad? If it did then you're going to sob in future chapters😁😂
I'm glad you like him, you'll probably like him more in the next chapter. Thanks for the comment.
😏 keep reading and you'll find out. 😂😁
At what cost indeed my liege. This chapter is even better than the previous one. Jere is a straight up aura farmer. It's like he's a nightfury everytime he dives in for the kill. I mean fourteen heads severed simultaneously, that's crazy. Quite impressive Senpai. Truly an awesome chapter.
Oct 23, 2025
To:Astrowolf🐤🐣
I actually didn't think it was that sexual but I guess it was now that I think about it. I'll rewrite the chapter soon. Thanks for the comment bro.
To:Kawaii Koi
Did I go too far?😭
Yeah they really are special. I'm actually writing exams too believe it not😁. So good luck and I'd be happy if you read it in one go. But fare warning, braise yourself for: Chapter 3, 5, 6, 7, and especially 14, 😁. Thanks for the comments by the way.
Oct 22, 2025
Oh my god thank you so much for the lovely comment. I'm glad that you like the title, I was worried that it was weird and unclear but now I know that it is good thanks to your comment, thank you so much. I'm happy you enjoyed. His past is gonna be revealed, in chapter 3 and other chapters so stay tuned, 😂. Thanks for reading.
To:IMASIAN
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, but I think you meant 13 my dude 🤣.
Thank you
Oct 21, 2025
Jere is pretty cool, I like how strong he is, and his wings are described with so much detail, I can't help but get exited everytime he's about to take flight. This story is pretty good so far, great work, Caeli-senpai.
Why does Koharu have to be so mean to her younger brother, I mean hello, your brother is freaking bruised, you could at least show that you care in order to make him feel better. Great chapter, keep it up.
It doesn't need to be perfect just compelling, mine is full of problems but since I research I'm able to write dialogue that's at least a little unique and not cliche. I think.
I'm lucky cause I'm turning 18 next march, so I'll be entering, I really hoped you'd enter as well.
Yeah kinda. When L.T.L.Y. started it was awesome but after chapter 11, that's when things started to get haywire. But you're dialogue is you problem area, since sometimes the characters feel like AI rather than humans. Sorry for being so harsh. Like I said you should learn about how to write dialogue, try researching, watching videos about writing and all that stuff, reading other people's novels can help too, it's helped me a ton. So try that. Sorry again, I'm kinda mean lately and I don't know why, but the reason I'm giving you notes is because I want your story to be peak, because it's already heading towards being peak it just needs minor fixes here and there.