Sep 23, 2025
I only have four word: Best Opening Chapter Ever. I like Sakura already, mainly because I can relate to her, the part where she couldn't introduce herself was perfectly written (✷‿✷).
She's shy and a little timid which reminds me of Wakana Gojo from my dress up darling. Overall, this is a great first chapter. Sakura is similar to Keith (My main character in my novel "Snow at First Sight") because they are both shy, even though Keith is more on the cynical and pessimistic side.
(⊙﹏⊙ Oh no I'm rambling....)
Question: Does your story feature "girl's love" and "boy's love" ? Because if it doesn't... you shouldn't use those tags or genres or whatever. Anyway keep up the good work.