Jul 01, 2025
So I read the bulk of your story last night and found it really great reading. The MC is both fascinating and terrifying at the same time, but I can't deny that, were I in her shoes, I'd probably be doing the same things, morals be damned. I'll go back and comment on some of the specific episodes as I can.
Um this particular episode... so is she still living at her Aunt/Uncle's place by this point? After last chapter's blow up (and the Aunt's statement that they wouldn't be able to tolerate any more craziness), I tend to think she'd have to live elsewhere, and still being in high school at this point, and her mother still not around until a few chapters later, I'm wondering if she ended up staying in the various Internet cafes (which is a thing some homeless people in Japan do endure) for a time.
