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Bauyrzhan

registered at: Jun 29, 2025

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Oct 05, 2025

I really liked your novel! The beginning was just a little unclear if you fix that, it would be perfect. Author, if you’re interested, I also have a novel. You can read it and share your feedback. I’ll be looking forward to your advice!

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Hero Summoning Gone Wrong: Now I'm Leading Demons

Chapter:7

Oct 05, 2025

Author, I like stories about twins. The chapter is good, but it feels a bit rushed — I couldn’t fully get to know the characters. Don’t take it too seriously, it’s just my advice. By the way, I also have a novel. I’d be happy if you could read it and give me some feedback.

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May you live a happy life, my red snowflakes.

Chapter:1

Oct 01, 2025

To: Epti

Author thank you very much.

Akira And Elara

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:62

Oct 01, 2025

Epti how do you make your photos? Because they look just like real anime. If it’s not a secret, could you share how you create them?

Akira And Elara

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:62

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Which scene did you like?

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:24

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Shura, thank you for your help. If it weren’t for you, I wouldn’t have noticed my mistakes. What rating would you give the plot?

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:24

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Am I introducing the characters well? But I still need a few more chapters to fully develop them.

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Shura, today there is a new chapter again.

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Shura, it’s alright, I’ll take your advice into account, but I have to admit, it felt a little uncomfortable for me. Still, there were parts I did like. Shura, tell me, which part of my novel did you find interesting and enjoyable?

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

And indeed, I often use words like camera and scene so that the audience can better imagine it

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Shura, thank you for your advice let me explain the reason I write in a script-like style is simply because I enjoy writing that way, and I want the reader to be able to picture everything vividly. But thank you for your suggestions. I think you are a wonderful writer, far better than me

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

To:H. Shura

Author, you have been supporting me for a long time If you notice any mistakes or points for improvement in a chapter, please let me know I’ll accept them

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:60

Sep 29, 2025

Author, thank you from the bottom of my heart for liking and supporting each chapter of my novel I wish you the best of luck in the competition!

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:60

Sep 26, 2025

The author’s first chapter is wonderful; the only issue is that it passed by too quickly. The plot is great. If the topic of science is interesting, I would like to suggest my own novel and hope you could give it a review.

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Magical Spirit Archer

Chapter:1

Sep 26, 2025

The author's stories about Akihiko surprised me, but if I were to say one thing, it feels like there's some rush in the chapter. I think it would be great if this part were more developed

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Echoes Beneath Forgotten Stars Volume 2

Chapter:2