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Sep 19, 2025

The author’s novel is amazing, especially Drog and Logan I really liked them. The prologue is great, by the way. If you enjoy novels on the theme of science, I would like to recommend my own work and look forward to your opinion

The Daughter of Cursed Steel

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2025

The novel turned out great, I enjoyed the plot, thank you. But is the character special forces or a regular soldier? That part was unclear to me.

Labyrinth Eternal

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2025

To:Shiro the Hero

Don’t take it the wrong way, I’m just giving a suggestion and sharing my thoughts.

The Heavenly Empress' Assassin

Chapter:1

Sep 06, 2025

Author, the chapter started well, but it seems the character faces few difficulties. I think it would feel more realistic if there were more challenges. However, your narration is excellent, and this is just my advice how you write it is entirely up to you.

The Hero Has No Interest in The Girls in His Party

Chapter:1

Sep 06, 2025

I think, author, the chapter feels a bit rushed; I lost track of how the story began.

The Heavenly Empress' Assassin

Chapter:1

Sep 03, 2025

Author, the first chapter is very unique great job

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:1

Sep 03, 2025

The chapter is good, I liked it, but could you tell me the main character’s name? And if you’re interested in science-themed stories, I can recommend my own novel. I’m looking forward to your opinion. Thank you in advance.

Reincarnated as a mana delivery guy

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

To: Epti

Author, I am deeply grateful to you for considering my suggestion and request.

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:37

Sep 01, 2025

To: Epti

Author, thank you for your support. Could you give me some advice on my novel? I might have made some mistakes in certain parts, and only a reader can notice them. If you have time, I would really appreciate your feedback. I truly enjoy your style of narration

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:37

Sep 01, 2025

Author, your idea is great. Unlike other isekai stories, it wasn’t a truck but a train that hit him, and the part where his internal organs could be seen from the outside was heavy, but realistic. I wish you success, author.

Ill-Fitting Crown

Chapter:0

Sep 01, 2025

Author, your novel has a wonderful beginning, but I think the start was a bit unclear for example, how did Welp enter the game? If you could explain that part, it would help. Still, I really liked the cinematography of the chapter. Also, author, if you’re interested in science-themed stories, I can share my own novel—if you’d like, you could take a look and give me your advice. Thank you in advance.

Blades of the Shattered Chaplets: 2nd Novel

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

To: Epti

Author, you can do it however you wish it’s your work. Mine is just a suggestion, that adding the elf language would make it feel more realistic. But it’s entirely up to you whether to accept it or not. Thank you for your reply, author.

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:37

Sep 01, 2025

Author, your novel is good, but I think it would feel more authentic if there were elements of a foreign language. This is just my advice, because a foreign language would add realism. For example, the main character Akira understanding the elves’ language immediately doesn’t seem very realistic to me. However, I liked the way you narrate the plot of your novel.

Planting Roots in Another World

Chapter:37

Aug 28, 2025

To:Okane Shotetsu

Author, which country are you from?

The Genius Mage is Actually a Failure?!

Chapter:0

Aug 28, 2025

Author, the chapter is good, but transitioning to another world feels a bit too fast, in my opinion. However, the plot is interesting. I’m looking forward to Lazuro’s story. Also, author, I have a science-themed novel—if you’re interested, I can give you some advice

Mythbreaker

Chapter:1

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