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Aug 28, 2025

To:Okane Shotetsu

Author, thank you for your reply

The Genius Mage is Actually a Failure?!

Chapter:0

Aug 28, 2025

Author, the beginning of the chapter is excellent, with the battle against the Demon King, but the main character should probably be clarified. Also, author, if you’re interested in a science-themed story, I can share my novel with you—you could read it if you like.

The Rebirth of Shadows

Chapter:0

Aug 28, 2025

Author, who is the main character? I found it hard to tell who it is in the chapter

The Genius Mage is Actually a Failure?!

Chapter:0

Aug 28, 2025

This is a good prologue. I found Ayko’s story interesting, and I liked the cinematography of the chapter. By the way, I also have a novel on a science theme if you’re interested, you could take a look.

Echoes Beneath Forgotten Stars Volume 1

Chapter:0

Aug 26, 2025

Author, these scenes felt familiar to me—it’s clear where you drew your inspiration from, but you have blended your influences skillfully. My advice would be not to make it too similar. And if you’re interested in a novel on the theme of science, I would like to share my own work and look forward to your advice.

Celestaris: Kaito - The Hero’s Journey

Chapter:0

Aug 26, 2025

Author, it seems like you were inspired by the anime The Rising of the Shield Hero. That’s a good idea, and I also have a novel—if you could give me your feedback, it would be a great support for me.

I Was Killed After Saving the World… So Now I’m Judging It

Chapter:0

Aug 26, 2025

Author, what do you mean by ‘knyaz’? From what I see, is the story taking place in ancient Slavic lands? Thanks in advance.

A Delinquent Reborn as a Royal!?

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2025

The chapter is good, but it was a bit unclear—was he reincarnated after being hit by a truck? If you could explain that, it would be great.

Powerless

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2025

The chapter has started well, but could you please mention the main character’s name? Also, I am writing a novella myself, and if you could give me your feedback, it would be wonderful.

Ocean Slugs: The Tower of Stars

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

Author, it’s a good start, but I think you’re missing a bit of a cinematic style—meaning more description of the surroundings. If you take that into account, I believe your novel could be amazing. Also, if you could take a look at my novel and give me some feedback, I would really appreciate your help too.

DAI DAI DAIKON!!!

Chapter:1

Aug 16, 2025

The novel looks amazing, but the main character’s name is unclear. By the way, I also have a novella—if you check it out and give your feedback, we can support each other.

A Prayer for the Reincarnated Moon Princess

Chapter:1

Aug 12, 2025

I think this novel is on a whole new level, as I’ve never heard of a woman’s reincarnation before—great start!
By the way, I’m also writing a novel. If you could take a look at mine and give me your feedback and suggestions, we can support each other.

Reincarnated as a High Elf Sage, I’ll Burn Down This Rotten Kingdom from Within

Chapter:1

Aug 09, 2025

To:KimbaBeans

Thank you for your advice. Throughout the novel, I give a lot of freedom to my imagination, so maybe it ended up like a script. Also, I included chapter titles so that the viewers could understand. Do you have any other suggestions?

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:0

Aug 01, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you very much for your help.

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:16

Aug 01, 2025

To:Mara

I find it more convenient to completely rewrite and revise the novel from its previous version because I’ve grown attached to this story. In short, is revising the previously published version in line with the rules?

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:16

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