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Jul 29, 2025
To:Bauyrzhan
y, it was my first time writing and my first chapter i didn't knew much about writing a novel so it turned like that, i was thinking of rewriting the 1st chapter after completing the novel.Thanks for your feedback🙂
it will be enough help if you point out small mistakes that will still help me grow☺️
thanks for spending your precious time to read my story and sure i will read your story whenever i am free. i still think my narration is not that good so please keep pointing out my mistakes. Thank You
Jul 25, 2025
Thanks again.
To:Spirit
Thanks spirit for reading my work. I did try to improve it in later chapter please continue to point out my mistakes
