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Vastaro

I'm Vastaro, a European in his early 20's, with dreams of having his own anime one day. (Clearly I watched too much Bakuman)
Looking forward to sharing my stories with you! :)

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Jan 28, 2026

To:kcayu

Honestly, I can't thank you enough for reading the whole thing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!❤️❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:36

Jan 27, 2026

You better finish this! great start 👍

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jan 23, 2026

Another really long chapter. But best one so far! I think for the next contest you should definitely try to shorten such chapters/make 2 out of em.

Draconic Verse

Chapter:2

Jan 21, 2026

Well, first of all, this was a LONG chapter haha.
Honestly, after reading Terry's and JP's comments, there isn't much I can add... I pretty much agree with everything they said.
You really do have some really amazing lines in here, the kind I could never write myself.

One thing I can add is that this chapter feels very light-novel-like, rather than a typical webnovel opening. What I mean by that is that the first chapter might be a bit intimidating for webnovel readers. They usually expect something to happen in every chapter, and while that does happen at the end here, this chapter will likely go way beyond 1500 words, which makes the beginning feel like quite a lot of lore-dropping.
You did a good job integrating some lore naturally by having the characters talk about it instead of explaining everything through narration, which I really liked. However, you could probably remove around half of the dialogue and still reach the same ending, while saving the remaining lore and dialogue for one of the next chapters. That way, the chapter could be shorter and more immediately engaging, while the worldbuilding unfolds more gradually afterward. I know it's not that much lore yet, and mostly dialogue, but still.
The narration btw was quite exceptional at some points.
Either way, I'm definitely curious to see what kind of world this is going to be.

Draconic Verse

Chapter:0

Jan 18, 2026

To:kcayu

You definitely did!!!👍❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:29

Jan 15, 2026

To:kcayu

I know this might sound weird, but your comment honestly brought a tear to my eye.😭 Thank you SO MUCH❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:29

Jan 15, 2026

To:kcayu

I probably should've introduced some more male characters for some mystery haha

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:24

Jan 15, 2026

To:kcayu

Yeah, I originally planned to have a rival, but for a story this short, it felt unnecessary. I'd rather focus on the main girl. Also, I saw you're all caught up. I can't thank you enough for that!!!!❤️ I hope it wasn't a waste of time. I'll make sure to read yours fully too! I just need to focus on finishing mine first😅

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:16

Jan 11, 2026

To:otkrlj

Haha, thank you so much! I tried to give it the most anime-like name possible. (Clearly inspired by THe Angel Next Door Spoils me Rotten). I just saw you have a novel called "The VTuber Next Door"... HAHAHA. Now I really gotta read that😂 I'm glad you like it! I hope you continue to enjoy it! :D 👍

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yeah, I love it!

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:8

Jan 08, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Good to know. Seems like it can be hit or miss...
Yeah, for this story I'll probably keep it that way, but I appreciate you sharing your perspective.

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:7

Jan 06, 2026

I love this!!! Best chapter so far imo

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:8

Jan 03, 2026

To:kcayu

😂😂😂 And here I was being uncertain about that line, haha.

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:11

Jan 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

No way you gave it a 10😱. Thank you so much!❤️👍
I'll do my best to watch out for those errors, but it's honestly pretty hard haha.
Thank you for reading all those chapters!!!

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:8

Jan 03, 2026

To:kcayu

DAMN, thank you so much! I didn't know my writing could evoke emotions like that. I really hope I can keep it up! ❤️👍

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:10

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