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Vastaro

I'm Vastaro, a European in his early 20's, with dreams of having his own anime one day. (Clearly I watched too much Bakuman)
Looking forward to sharing my stories with you! :)

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Jan 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:6

Jan 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

If you like Yui, then I've got a lot more coming for you, haha. Though admittedly, sometimes I feel like I might've overdone her a bit.😂😅
I tried to write Yuna as realistically as possible, considering her backstory, so she probably doesn't feel like a standard heroine at all.
I'm really glad you liked it! :D

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:5

Jan 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

Yeah, I started adapting their advice arout chapter 4, I think. I've planned out around 40 chapters in total, so it's going to be a bit stressful. But I'm planning to revise the earlier chapters once everything is finished.

This high rating honestly feels way too high for me😂 so thank you again! I'm really excited to see what you'll think of the next chapters.👍

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:2

Jan 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

Wow, you really commented a lot while I was away. Thank you so much for that first of all! I'm going to read everything properly now. Your high rating honestly gives me the motivation to keep going, so I really appreciate it. I hope the next chapters will live up to that aswell, haha.
And I'm guessing by "I know what type of person you are" you mean someone who's way too deep in all that VTuber stuff, right?
If so, you couldn't be more wrong haha. Honestly, the lack of VTuber knowledge was one thing that made me hesitate a bit before writing this story. I've probably watched like 5 hours of VTuber content in total😅
I hope the next comments will also be this nice, haha. Thank you so much! It means a lot. :D

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:1

Dec 27, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yeah, true. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks! :D

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:6

Dec 23, 2025

To:kcayu

Thanks for the catch again, I'll update it later!
I knew it's not that smart to go with Yuna and LunaZero as her streamer name😂

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:8

Dec 23, 2025

To:kcayu

I don't to push you haha, but you're the only one right now who tells his thoughts on each chapter. And they have been pretty useful👍👌

Don't worry, I'm probably the slowest reader out there😂

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:7

Dec 23, 2025

To:kcayu

German is my first language :)

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:5

Dec 22, 2025

To:kcayu

Thank you!
I'm interested to see if you'll like the next few chapters, as those were the hardest to write for me up until now. You complimented the dialogue already, but those chapters include a lot of emotional scenes. I hope I managed to do them justice😅😬

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:7

Dec 22, 2025

To:kcayu

Again, thank you!!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!❤️

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:6

Dec 22, 2025

To:kcayu

Wow, thank you so much!😃
The novel is going to be pretty dialogue-heavy, since I'm not that great at long descriptive passages. So I'm really glad to hear the dialogue works for you :)

About the 2nd point: You already pointed out in another chapter that I tend to reuse the same dialogue tags. English isn't my first language, so my vocabulary in that area is still a bit limited. Also, a lot of light novel I read don't really use a lot of dialogue tags, so I assumed it's gonna be fine. That said, I'll take it to heart and look if I can improve on that part.

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:5

Dec 18, 2025

To:kcayu

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! That honestly means a lot to me :D

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The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:4

Dec 17, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yeah. I mean, I could've just refreshed my memory on which symbols you use for certain characters, because after a few days and reading other things in between, it’s easy to forget. Once someone understands your approach, I don’t think they’ll have any trouble with it anymore. So thanks for clarifying it in the other chapter.

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Limelight Blight

Chapter:9

Dec 17, 2025

To:Vastaro

*progressing

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Limelight Blight

Chapter:9

Dec 17, 2025

Again you included the three dots in the beginning paragraphs, even though no change happened. It just kinda irritates me tbh. I always think a switch is happening and therefore read the first sentences of the new paragraph thinking it's another person. Maybe you could fix this by doing location-switches n stuff with something else. Maybe -------------
Thats what I use.
Other than that, story is progressive nicely. I honestly have no clue at this point how you'll wrap this up. No clue where it could go :D

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Limelight Blight

Chapter:9