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Oct 01, 2025

that's a steep price, wow. you really want Aya suffer

Failure Will Make My Pen Sharp as a Blade: My Writer's Life in Another World

Chapter:8

Oct 01, 2025

poor Aya, thinking the world would allow her to have a source of comfort

Failure Will Make My Pen Sharp as a Blade: My Writer's Life in Another World

Chapter:7

Oct 01, 2025

Aya just can't catch a break can she

Failure Will Make My Pen Sharp as a Blade: My Writer's Life in Another World

Chapter:6

Oct 01, 2025

What a great way to end the novel. The characters are still engaging in their antics, there is set up for a second but not so much that it feels expected, and it feels like it could very well be the end of a story.

Time and Time Again is a great name for the team, especially because of how it was thought up.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:30

Sep 30, 2025

To:kazesenken

I feel time loop stories are better when from the pov of someone who doesn’t loop, more interesting too. It’s nice seeing more stories that pull it off.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:27

Sep 30, 2025

this is an amazing end point.

I really like how one of the most innocuous abilities of Roze’s ended up saving the day.

I’ve never been a huge of the whole “you had the power the whole time” trope, but I think you did a great job with it.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:29

Sep 30, 2025

the real journey was the friend we treasure along the way

Time and Time Again

Chapter:28

Sep 30, 2025

Roze's POV was such a good decision for a moment like this

Time and Time Again

Chapter:27

Sep 30, 2025

To:kazesenken

I am incredibly suspicious of him

Time and Time Again

Chapter:24

Sep 30, 2025

"Time and Time again"

He did it, he said the thing

Clockenspiel is more or less what I thought it would over the past couple of chapters, you did a great job meeting expectations

Time and Time Again

Chapter:25

Sep 30, 2025

Is it bad that I'm half expecting Gideon to be intentionally setting these flags as motivation and is planning on pulling something at the end

Time and Time Again

Chapter:24

Sep 30, 2025

of course Gideon would slip up

Time and Time Again

Chapter:23

Sep 30, 2025

the flags...
I like how you keep tying Gideon's ability and his experiences to his past life and personality

Time and Time Again

Chapter:22

Sep 30, 2025

solid teamwork. fake fights are always kinda funny and I like how you had Gideon do one again

Time and Time Again

Chapter:21

Sep 30, 2025

I'm interested to see what is inhabiting Clockenspiel, it's couldn't be old robots right, as cool as that would be.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:20

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