Aug 02, 2025
To:kazesenken
I actually wrote this before you said what you did about the maturity which is why I was a bit surprised.
I'm glad you think he deserved it. It means I means I did a good job making him terrible. My main concern when writing it was that I didn't make him awful enough. My main concern now is that the fight scene/the death scene was cringe and that I didn't properly set the tone earlier on.