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Aug 05, 2025
I really enjoyed this as a fellow SAO fan! Great to see a book in this genre doing so well with views and likes. Anything in particular that's helping get eyeballs on it, or have you found that the good writing mostly does the work for you? Either way, awesome start! 😃
Aug 03, 2025
To:Hollow
LOL yeah... Not a smooth opening for him.
Aug 01, 2025
Might seem like a strange comment, but I like how you format the lines that are his thoughts. I've seen italics used before, but the -- at the beginning really helps my brain catch that it's an internal piece of dialogue. Great story thus far!
"Wet Soggy Tofu" will live rent-free in my head next time I'm on a train. The way you describe his thoughts is on-point and resonates - which might say something about me LOL. Keep up the great work!
Jul 31, 2025
To:McMolly
Glad to hear you're enjoying it! And I'm very excited to release the next few chapters as the narrative starts to get off of the ground.
