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Oct 16, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you Mara

Today I Died. Tomorrow My Battle Begins.

Chapter:11

Oct 16, 2025

This week’s chapter will be delayed, as I was out of town with my partner celebrating our anniversary

Today I Died. Tomorrow My Battle Begins.

Chapter:11

Oct 10, 2025

To:Mara

Very helpful to hear your opinion! I edited it a bit to make Laufa’s thoughts more clear, while still leaving a bit of ambiguity and suspense. Thank you

Today I Died. Tomorrow My Battle Begins.

Chapter:11

Oct 10, 2025

To:Mara

No, Laufa isn’t a decoy, I wonder if I should’ve made it clearer More so, Eralia believes Laufa can inch out a win here exactly because Mordhun expects her. You’ll see next chapter!

Today I Died. Tomorrow My Battle Begins.

Chapter:11

Oct 10, 2025

The more this concept is expanded on, the funner I find it. The atmosphere is still tense and mysterious, but seeing you weave writing concepts like plot holes into the world feels very charming!

The Last Revision

Chapter:3

Oct 10, 2025

A very interesting second chapter. Like the first chapter, your descriptions are amazing, many lines stood out to me. ‘The Rewrite’ is a fun and unique idea, too

The Last Revision

Chapter:2

Oct 09, 2025

You have a very unique writing style and attention to detail! I’ll mirror what other commenters below have said about shortening the dialogues and descriptions. I think the perfect balance would really help transport your readers into the world alongside Kikyo, especially with your eye for detail! Still, good chapter, and I look forward to reading the rest when I have time.

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:1

Oct 09, 2025

In the end, Lin’s aspirations feel quite relatable

Lindiriel and the Forbidden Spell

Chapter:4

Oct 09, 2025

Again, really enjoyed the humour here. Their travels are very fun and full of personality

Lindiriel and the Forbidden Spell

Chapter:3

Oct 09, 2025

I genuinely loved the humour in this chapter!

Lindiriel and the Forbidden Spell

Chapter:2

Oct 09, 2025

To:spicarie

Today I Died. Tomorrow My Battle Begins.

Chapter:1

Oct 07, 2025

Your prose is very detailed, especially your descriptions. Great first chapter

The Last Revision

Chapter:1

Oct 05, 2025

Hungry Aki interrupting their conversation made me laugh, and the moment between the three in the tent was very endearing…

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:24

Oct 05, 2025

I happened to be reading The Sun Will Rise when you posted, so I’m here early this time! So far, Lindirial’s internal voice is very charming and distinct

Lindiriel and the Forbidden Spell

Chapter:1

Oct 05, 2025

Selene’s a queen !! I wasn’t expecting that, and there’s definitely even more we don’t know

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:23

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