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Sep 19, 2026

Unreliable first person POV as comedy. I think it is better to spread the chunky paragraphs which contain intrusive thought. Make few spaces to breath the jokes.

Scatterbrained Alice: How Could I Forget to Save the Kingdom?!

Chapter:1

Sep 18, 2026

I wonder, how much Eggy's food will cost?

The Crimson Witch: How I Became a Real Hero in a World Full of Fakes!

Chapter:5

Sep 18, 2026

Lampshading detected. Do not think too hard. Just enjoy the story nyo!

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:1

Sep 18, 2026

Quite good start I suppose. Fallen from her grace, a little tragic.

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:0

Sep 18, 2026

The rift. It remind me of Elizabeth from Bioshock Infinite.

Time Slider Katherina

Chapter:1

Sep 17, 2026

To:rhedak

There is another extra epilogue chapter. A slice of life comedy.

Mad Magus

Chapter:48

Sep 16, 2026

Did you use the unintentional potion/poison making gimmick in the earlier chapter before? When the unintentional culprit is a boy.

Witch’s First Espionage Mission in 200 Years

Chapter:54

Sep 15, 2026

I guess the vampires key tone sounds like a bloody gothic opera 🧛‍♂️

The Light Beneath Closed Eyes

Chapter:2

Sep 14, 2026

Why didn't you give name to the Miss Shotacon? Wasn't it natural for her to introduce herself, even if she didn't tell her real name? For example: "You can call me Sho, boya!"

ASHEN LIFE

Chapter:5

Sep 14, 2026

The missy's parents have peculiar taste.

ASHEN LIFE

Chapter:3

Sep 14, 2026

Hawawawawawa

ASHEN LIFE

Chapter:2

Sep 14, 2026

What the.... it's a unique writing style. You've combined lore feeding to the audience in straightforward style. Gimmicky sound effects could grab readers attention.

ASHEN LIFE

Chapter:0

Sep 14, 2026

Domain expansion

Witch’s First Espionage Mission in 200 Years

Chapter:50

Sep 14, 2026

So Thorny was Hor*y in the past 😁

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:29

Sep 14, 2026

Did you intentionally use ambiguous words like mint (a leaf), mail (letter), etc? I know what the intended words are based on the context but it can add funny (dis)interpretation. I know the last one is intentional pun, oh the Bright One.

The Hunt for the Everglow Crystals

Chapter:6

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