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Aug 29, 2025

Love the atmosphere of the story and mostly the rhythm throughout the whole chapter. Love it !🤗

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:1

Aug 29, 2025

Really like seeing Nell going in each internal world one by one and seeing how they are desperate inside.
The quest for power is infinite so all means to obtain it are useful. Though, I never could have thought that they could linked their real body to the one inside their internal world. It's an interesting idea to gain power. 🤔

An Original Sin

Chapter:19

Aug 29, 2025

It's a real Cornelian dilemma that Nell faces. Give him some luck in his miserable life 😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:18

Aug 28, 2025

Well, something tells me that this isn't the last time we'll see Dess, she seems to have a lot of secrets🤔

An Original Sin

Chapter:17

Aug 28, 2025

I wouldn't want to have Verwa in front of me if even Dominic let go of his throat because it didn't hurt him.
And I think that Kaya didn't get this money legally. 😂

An Original Sin

Chapter:16

Aug 26, 2025

Now that’s a strong opponent !! And he's only number 5! I can’t imagine how powerful the first ones are... Nell need to quickly become stronger or else it will be terrible...💀😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:15

Aug 26, 2025

An intense fight, the commander's death and a new technique with his power. Nell had lived many things during this night. But the fact that even if he don’t want to kill, he's forced to under these circumstances. It shows an interesting point of view about his character development. Will he always have no pity and kill to protect what he loves or will he think of his actions and try other methods than killing? That’s what I'm asking myself right now.
Another great chapter as always 🤗

An Original Sin

Chapter:14

Aug 26, 2025

Ame is rather direct in his methods: "insult him" 😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:12

Aug 24, 2025

I think Nell will never have a good and peaceful sleep. Either he's sleeping on something not comfortable, or he is visited by the god of time.
Let him sleep well!!😂

An Original Sin

Chapter:11

Aug 23, 2025

Marē seems to be an interesting character obeying to L'eau orders.🤔
I hope Eternal Flame will fight L'eau some day, it would be fun as it would do : fire vs water🤣
My jokes are bad but I laugh at them so it’s a win for me !!

An Original Sin

Chapter:10

Aug 23, 2025

Nell died and revived?? I was not ready for all of this at once, wow. A great power that comes with a big price to pay if he uses it too much: death.
And poor wolf, she got misgendered.😔
Impatient to see why L'eau and the strange figure are in the internal world of Kaya !!

An Original Sin

Chapter:9

Aug 21, 2025

Dominic must have an internal world he really don’t want Nell to see. What could it look like? 🤔
Also sleeping on the floor ?? That’s not some good sleep he's going to get but back problems 😭
Loved this chapter, keep up the good work !😉

An Original Sin

Chapter:8

Aug 20, 2025

The power of winter is very interesting. Using the blood of the one he killed to fuel his blood cloud is a very interesting idea.🤔

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:1

Aug 20, 2025

The automatic car made me laugh so much! 🤣 Nell didn't understand anything, beside the fact that he now knows how to insult someone.
And as soon as he arrived, he was already forced to fight. Kids are aggressive these days...

An Original Sin

Chapter:7

Aug 19, 2025

Very interesting chapter where Nell learns all sorts of things and finally decide to make efforts !
Also liked the idea of the inner world that reflect well what Ame is truly inside.
I like how you develop your characters without being too quick nor repetitive, it's all well brought. And we're just at the start, so there is a lot more to learn about them and they will surely evolve again!!
I'm impatient for the next chapter !

An Original Sin

Chapter:6

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