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Atsutashi

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registered at: Aug 06, 2025

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Oct 12, 2025

Don’t worry, Melodette, most of us hate maths too !😆😔

❣️They Told Me "Keep The Talisman On Its Forehead" But It Keeps Falling Off!?!❣️

Chapter:4

Sep 30, 2025

What a journey this has been! This chapter really wraps the story up nicely. If you ever decide to continue it, I’d be excited to see how you expand the worldbuilding and develop the characters even further. Wonderful work, Jane! 🤗

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:30

Sep 30, 2025

Hooray! Another nickname earned haha😆

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:29

Sep 30, 2025

Haha, the castle totally gives off boss zone vibes 😆
I really like how you explore so many different places in the story. It makes the worldbuilding feel so much richer and diverse!

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:27

Sep 30, 2025

Ohhhhh I love the fake island ! What a great idea!!😆

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:25

Sep 29, 2025

One thing : Absolute cinema!

What a great conclusion after everything that happened. Love the story and all the characters! Hope to see more of the novel in the future!🤗

Half-Elf Messiah

Chapter:34

Sep 29, 2025

Jesha : "Everything was part of my plan!" 😆

Half-Elf Messiah

Chapter:33

Sep 29, 2025

Ohhhh I didn't noticed the reference at first but now that I do it's so cool haha: Bonnie and Clyde!!
I hope nothing bad will happen to Saif if he goes to this dangerous zone...

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2025

Oh, so the internal conflict between Instinct and Saif has really taken a turn... I don’t know where this will go

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:22

Sep 29, 2025

OH! Finally Saif speaks! Well... not directly, but it’s still an improvement!

Typo detected: 'an swung an axe at him', quite the mix-up.🫡

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:21

Sep 29, 2025

Saif is accumulating the titles, the list is growing bigger and bigger haha.
And wow a drunk Shay Kha is really expressive lol. 😂

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:20

Sep 29, 2025

NOOO BRON!!! I hope Saif makes them pay!
The last line is just for Law’s ego, haha.

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:19

Sep 29, 2025

They're so cute all together! I'm melting in front of such kindness and happy family!

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:18

Sep 29, 2025

He meets Bron again... but under such circumstances... I hope they’ll be reunited as a family one day!

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:17

Sep 29, 2025

Saif really doesn’t have any luck with birds. They’re always swooping down on him at any moment 😂

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:16

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