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Aug 18, 2025

3 things I enjoyed in this chapter
1.The fact that Quill actually comes from another world to Tokyo is quite interesting, because usually it’s the other way around.
2.The fact that it’s a unique trip — with no way back if he returns to his world — makes the suspense more intense, as we keep asking ourselves what will happen if he is forced to return, abandoning Rina and the world that makes him feel things he has never felt before.
3.The Choir. Their presence is as terrifying as any creature from a horror movie. If I had them in front of me, I’m not sure I would have the same courage as Quill to run away. 😂

Rebel Hearts in the Neon Bazaar

Chapter:2

Aug 18, 2025

Really strong start with this prologue. I like the tone and the atmosphere of the story you put up so far. The actions were so well described that it was easy to follow and visualize what Quill was doing. Love it !

Rebel Hearts in the Neon Bazaar

Chapter:0

Aug 18, 2025

At first, an existential crisis where Nell wants to die. Then, it’s Ame who is dying. My heart wasn’t ready for this. 😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:5

Aug 17, 2025

To:kazesenken

Damn, I see what you refer to, my precious character ruined by a meme, but it's so funny 😂

Fear the Night

Chapter:1

Aug 17, 2025

Nell will have to go through a lot to find his humanity and finally sit on the throne.
I love Ame's past. He reveals part of his true nature when he talks about his father.
I can't wait to see what happens next! 😁

An Original Sin

Chapter:4

Aug 17, 2025

What is it to be human? What is a human? Who am I? All these questions that we may have asked ourselves at some point in our lives bring us, the readers, closer to the subject of this chapter. I asked myself these questions once again while reading. There are few stories that make me stop reading to think. I hope you continue to impress, not only me, but also other readers of your incredible novel! 🤗

An Original Sin

Chapter:3

Aug 16, 2025

Wow! Just wow! A beautiful, flawless writing that makes the reading not boring and enjoyable from start to finish. What a first chapter ! I'm feeling like Nell, all these informations are just poured into my brain as I'm reading every word and I find it really cool.

An Original Sin

Chapter:1

Aug 14, 2025

Great chapter like always. I'm impatient to see what path she will chose when she will reach lever 5 : leave or stay.🤔

ROM HACK // LOG.DD [ Laid-Off Game Dev Dimension ]

Chapter:9

Aug 14, 2025

To:oo-Suuki-oo

Thanks for your comment! Glad you liked this chapter and I hope you will like the rest of the story ! 🤗

Fear the Night

Chapter:0

Aug 12, 2025

To:Steampocalypse

Hey, for you to better understand I changed, in this chapter and the previous one, the term camouflage which is now invisibility, for more clarity. I also added lines of dialogue to start to explain why Celi could see Iwao, without further explanation as it will come later in the story. Hope it will be clearer for you and others who have read the previous chapter and this one just after their publication !

Fear the Night

Chapter:4

Aug 11, 2025

To:Steampocalypse

I understand what you are thinking and that is the desired effect. This timeskip brings a lot of questions, like you said, and Iwao and Saya don't give much of an answer to them. But there is a reason. These two years have an important meaning for all the characters. You will have your answers in the next chapters. At first, I had to do the timeskip to introduce some elements to understand what happened during the last two years. You will see.😁

Fear the Night

Chapter:3

Aug 09, 2025

Today, I learned a new slur thanks to you : "Shitfuck" ! Splendid, I expand my vocabulary😆!
Also what a good description about what it's like to have a panick attack. The part with the phone that is nowhere to be found is very relatable !!

ROM HACK // LOG.DD [ Laid-Off Game Dev Dimension ]

Chapter:6

Aug 09, 2025

To:Steampocalypse

Thank you ! I hope you will like what will be coming next if this chapter already caught your attention !

Fear the Night

Chapter:2

Aug 09, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

For the depth of the character my friend! He deserves happiness, that's for sure, and he will have someday.

Fear the Night

Chapter:0

Aug 09, 2025

From the first chapter to this one, I really like this story as it is for the moment and I hope you will continue in that direction. You have a very fluid writing that helps to focus even more on the story. And the way you are describing everything with a deep sense of detail allow to imagine where we are in the story, what all look like. The peaceful but intriguing start of the story is relaxing but leave with the waiting that now the things are going to move forward towards the main point of the story. Keep going !😁

ROM HACK // LOG.DD [ Laid-Off Game Dev Dimension ]

Chapter:5

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