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Atsutashi

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May 14, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

Damn I didn’t notice. Too many backs 😂

But yeah, we like blood here 🩸😏

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:11

May 13, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

Understood, Mr. Snwo 🫡
It's noted for my edit!

But glad you like the suffering, as there is more to come

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:8

May 12, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

Yeah you can really see why this pause felt good (it's the before and after exam between the last chapter and this one haha).

I kinda undrrstand what you mean for the theatrical monologues, your suggestions were what I already had in mind so I'm glad we think the same thing😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:7

May 11, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

thanks!
Well the story uses some horror elements but is not "pure horror". Still, it's true that I can use the other senses to make it more "scary" or show how what is happening is really intense

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:6

May 11, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

I see. Well, that’s a thing I wanted to do at first (making the SoL a bit longer) but at the time I wrote, I just thought it would be nice to just make a little build up before the most interesting part of the chapter. But now, it's true that I think it could be better to make this chapter longer with some more SoL, or maybe add another chapter before this one just for SoL. That would be a decision I'll have to make in the edit. I'll take everything you said into consideration for this.

Thanks for the feedback once again!

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:5

May 11, 2026

To:Deleted User

Well, if I could have delivered it before, I would have. But I had some other obligations (shitty university), but hey at least you got it!

Actually, thanks for sticking up until the end, I enjoyed seeing you react to every chapter. I still hope you liked it overall, despite the fact it made you suffer emotionally.

As for the fluff, well, adding much wasn’t my thing. I hope you'll think about me in your nightmares though 😏

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:28

May 11, 2026

To:Deleted User

thanks for hating me, I did my job well 😄

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:27

May 11, 2026

To:Deleted User

i love seeing you suffer, my poor caeli

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:25

May 11, 2026

To:Deleted User

because you like me very much? 🤔😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:24

May 11, 2026

To:Deleted User

changing your opinion quite quickly I see 😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:23

May 11, 2026

To:Snwoflake's Dream

thanks for the feedback snwo. I'll take your critiques into consideration when I'll make another edit of the story.☺️

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:4

Mar 22, 2026

To:Deleted User

should I apologize ?
I don't think so haha 🙇‍♂️

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:21

Mar 22, 2026

To:Deleted User

maybe that means it’s time to reread everything from the start 😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:20

Jan 30, 2026

A touch of mystery behind the incomprehension and the questions left in my thoughts as I read this chapter.

The flow, the prose, and the feelings were there. With your descriptive style it seems I was forced to transport into the story. I was forced to want more. I was intrigued. The prose and the questions captured me.

This is a very strong first chapter, giving to the reader just enough to catch their attention, and making them eager to know more about this mysterious person and their scythe.

And that’s what happened. I was left with one single feeling : I want more!

Apostle of Ash: A Doll’s Journey towards Paradise

Chapter:1

Jan 25, 2026

To:Deleted User

but is it possible? That's the real question 🤔

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:19

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