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Atsutashi

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Jan 30, 2026

A touch of mystery behind the incomprehension and the questions left in my thoughts as I read this chapter.

The flow, the prose, and the feelings were there. With your descriptive style it seems I was forced to transport into the story. I was forced to want more. I was intrigued. The prose and the questions captured me.

This is a very strong first chapter, giving to the reader just enough to catch their attention, and making them eager to know more about this mysterious person and their scythe.

And that’s what happened. I was left with one single feeling : I want more!

Apostle of Ash: A Doll’s Journey towards Paradise

Chapter:1

Jan 25, 2026

To:Caelinth

but is it possible? That's the real question 🤔

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:19

Jan 21, 2026

To:Caelinth

damn, I would have loved to hear that 😔

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:18

Jan 20, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

Maxwell knows how to do things well 😌
(too bad he had his shoes and socks on for this)

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:10

Jan 18, 2026

To:Caelinth

One day there will be no more words, only cries of prehistoric men coming from you at this point😭

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:17

Jan 14, 2026

To:Caelinth

I'm going to frame this comment and hang it on my wall

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:16

Jan 13, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

yeah but dying is not cool for these kids tho😔

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:9

Jan 11, 2026

To:Caelinth

Yeah, honestly, if you managed to find what happens in the following chapters it would really be surprising😂

As for the fluff, wait for it! How do you want fluff when he's all alone!😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:15

Jan 11, 2026

To:Caelinth

Well, there's going on what’s going on, that’s it haha! But fluff will come... sooner or later😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:14

Jan 09, 2026

To:Caelinth

sorry, it will come... but not for now😆😭

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:13

Jan 07, 2026

To:Mike Psellos

Well, I didn’t know this movie so I searched infos about it. From what I found, there seems to not have any kind of resemblance between the movie and my story, but since I didn’t watch it my opinion is kinda biased honestly🤔

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:12

Jan 07, 2026

To:Caelinth

maybe, but it’s kinda fun... at least for me😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:12

Jan 06, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

maybe the shorts will fall, explode, or something else, but under pressure it's hard not to crack 🙂‍↕️

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:8

Dec 27, 2025

To:Caelinth

maybe it's building... or maybe you’re being prepared to be shattered later🤔

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:11

Dec 27, 2025

To:Caelinth

Well... the second option seems appropriate haha. It's what you can call a "normal" chapter 😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:10

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