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Nov 11, 2025
To:sarahxaa
I'm glad😭Wasn't sure if I was writing it well
To:Sakura Mazaki
Thank you so much for pointing out my mistakes and for the suggestion, I really appreciate it!❤️
Nov 10, 2025
This is a really nice start. So far it feels like a cute story but I saw the warnings in the authors note so I'm so curious about where this goes. Can't wait to see more❤️
To:Echoblue
Of course! I really enjoy your story. Thank you also for your support, you have been really encouraging for me too ❤️
"Don't speak of freedom. I already have it - right here, beside you"😭my heart. This was beautifully written. I know you said you were having trouble with it but you did an amazing job. You truly captured the scene perfectly to me😭❤️
I understand how you feel. It's hard to capture the scene from your head just into words. But you write really well so I'm sure you can do it justice❤️
Nov 09, 2025
Guess we'll have to find out👀
To:Chris Zee
A shounen protagonist ahaha I didn't think about it like that. Glad you found it interesting, hope you continue to enjoy❤️
To:TheLeanna_M
She is a difficult one
Congratulations on hitting 1k views. Love the concept of your story. I enjoy the magical girl genre and this is a nice spin on it. I look forward to what you have in store for this❤️
I feel the romance brewing, can't wait to read more❤️
"What picture?" Click. I absolutely love that. So simple yet it stood out to me.
I love how you write. You have a way of drawing me in, excited to see where this goes❤️
Also slight typo I think: "It felt warm agains the cool desert wind". I'm assuming it's supposed to be "against"?
I loved how it's usually the guardian protecting the princess but in this chapter, even though she's scared she wants to protect him too and it's such a nice contrast. Overall, it felt like their relationship strengthened and there was some sort of subtle shift. And how come you feel like you can't publish the next one? Is there a part of it you're not satisfied with yet? Or because you love it so much you aren't ready to release it?
Nov 08, 2025
I finally caught up😭can't wait to find out what happens next❤️