Jan 09, 2026
To:Mario Nakano 64
Thank you for the feedback. I do agree with you as I was constantly worried about it being dragged out. I had so many ideas but didn't know what to keep and cut and that lack of organization was my downfall there. I did think of ending it earlier but I wasn't sure if it was satisfactory in terms of the romance aspect, at least if I were the reader I would've felt like it wasn't developed enough so I tried to add more with that at the end, which in turn dragged it out longer. Something to definitely work on for future projects so I really appreciate your feedback so I can improve❤️
Thank you again for your advice. Also thank you for reading and the support you've given me❤️