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Dec 22, 2025

In one of your other comments you mentioned that your upcoming chapters you struggled with, but I didn't feel that at all. It flowed really well and seemed natural for your characters. You did a nice job.❤️
A small typo I think: "Luna?" I whispered. "What's wrong? Who is it?"
Is it supposed to be Yuna here?

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:8

Dec 22, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Is that the sound I hear👀jk jk
You read so fast lol I didn't expect that
I hope it's turning out cute and that the relationship is flowing well😭❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:40

Dec 22, 2025

Not going to lie, I was stressing that Sora wasn't actually going to take her back😭
But her realization of Ren stealing her attention was so cute. Can't wait to see her heal in terms of her singing and come to terms with her feelings❤️

Spotlight

Chapter:26

Dec 22, 2025

To:Vastaro

I'll let you know what I think when I read them. Sorry, I'm a slow reader so it takes me a while to get there lol but I'm sure it turned out well❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:7

Dec 22, 2025

To:Vastaro

Yeah dialogue tags I don't believe are required. As I said it might just be my own preference. I haven't read many light novels so I don't know what's normal or not. But don't worry about that area too much as I think overall your dialogue flows really well.
Your English is very good to me, I wouldn't have guessed it wasn't your first language. What's your first language?

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:5

Dec 22, 2025

Love seeing Ava's growth after everything❤️feels like we're on the way to a heartfelt ending

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:28

Dec 22, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I'm hoping you enjoy the end. I reviewed my notes and hopefully this is the right direction. Thank you again for your advice, I always take it into consideration❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:39

Dec 22, 2025

To:sarahxaa

Thank you❤️I appreciate your support

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:39

Dec 21, 2025

To:Crys Meer

I'm glad to hear you like it. I was worried it was too simple of a chapter, but at the same time that's what I wanted lol. I hope you'll enjoy up until the end. I'm sad for it to end too but its been such an enjoyable story for me to write and I'm thankful for yours and everyone else's support.❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:39

Dec 21, 2025

Overall very nice flow. Also cute showcase between him and his sister, and him and yuna (even though he doesnt know lol)❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:7

Dec 21, 2025

This was a very cute chapter. Loved seeing the nervous sides❤️

【Vodcast】 Error Love

Chapter:9

Dec 20, 2025

Ren😭😭The man you are❤️

Spotlight

Chapter:25

Dec 20, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Not his fault but he feels guilty nonetheless😭
Thank you, I'll correct it❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:37

Dec 20, 2025

To:Crys Meer

I'm sure you can get a lot done before the deadline. You might still be able to finish.
I look forward to the rest of your story and any more to come in the future👀
I'm the opposite lol. I have all my off time now then once the new year hits I'll be working everyday basically. So that's why I'm not sure the direction to take right now as there's so much yet not as much time as I would like.
My name on the discord or any other social media is the same as on here, would love to connect with you when you get a chance❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:38

Dec 20, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Thank you I tried my best. Hopefully I can still finish since I still have a lot I want to do but need to adapt it accordingly.
Even if you don't finish in the deadline, I hope you do still finish whenever you have time. You've written such a lovely story already❤️
There's a lot of people on the discord and I also thought it'd be nice if we could connect outside the comments lol

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:38

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