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Dec 14, 2025

Poor Yuame😭how dare the tengu bully him. I'm glad he has Kaoru by his side at least. I just hope he doesn't take the insults too much to heart😭

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:9

Dec 14, 2025

What happened to Julian😭

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:22

Dec 14, 2025

To:Vastaro

Thank you. I'm glad to hear it has your feeling hooked, hopefully that continues throughout the story.
And don't worry if you don't see any mistakes as I'm sure someone else will point them out too lol. But if you do see anything to work on or suggestions, I'm always open to hear it.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:1

Dec 13, 2025

"Luna gave me a glance. I shouldn't have said that."
Did I miss something? Who's Luna?

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:2

Dec 13, 2025

"I just want to hear my mom scolding me again for not eating enough."😭I know it's a simple line but it made me sad
Anyway in terms of feedback, most of my points align with what was already said. Mainly your punctuation, which is easily fixable so don't get discouraged about it.
My only other critique is that you use the phrase "I said" a lot throughout the chapter, which can feel repetitive and also disrupt the flow of the story. Don't get me wrong, you can still use that, but a little variation would help avoid it sounding too repetitive.
I did enjoy your first chapter though. I'll try to catch up soon❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:1

Dec 13, 2025

To:Crys Meer

She definitely handled it better than I would've lol
"But I wanted to" is gonna be this story's catchphrase at this point

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:33

Dec 13, 2025

To:sarahxaa

At least he tried to apologize😭

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:33

Dec 12, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Nooo I wasn't going to have Jun do that out of nowhere😭
Ahaha got to make that perfect dream man❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:32

Dec 12, 2025

What a creep waiting in the bushes😭
Also love to see more of the bond between Misaki and Shun❤️

Spotlight

Chapter:21

Dec 12, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Thank you😭Glad to hear Jun has come off as her rock. He really be trying
And thank you for pointing it out❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:31

Dec 12, 2025

At so many points in this chapter my jaw dropped. Very well written

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:21

Dec 12, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thank you so much❤️I was a bit worried about the flow with this one but I'm glad to hear it came off well

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:32

Dec 12, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Making our way there, slowly but surely❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:31

Dec 12, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Ahaha he living in his own world

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:29

Dec 12, 2025

To:sarahxaa

Aren't we all😭

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:31

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