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Jan 09, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thank you for the feedback. I do agree with you as I was constantly worried about it being dragged out. I had so many ideas but didn't know what to keep and cut and that lack of organization was my downfall there. I did think of ending it earlier but I wasn't sure if it was satisfactory in terms of the romance aspect, at least if I were the reader I would've felt like it wasn't developed enough so I tried to add more with that at the end, which in turn dragged it out longer. Something to definitely work on for future projects so I really appreciate your feedback so I can improve❤️

Thank you again for your advice. Also thank you for reading and the support you've given me❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:47

Jan 09, 2026

To:sarahxaa

I'm all for women standing strong✨I love that their story is not just their romance but also their growth as individuals❤️

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:32

Jan 09, 2026

So many powerful lines in this chapter😭what an ending. I'm glad they found each other and chose to stay together. I hope they continue to have a healing journey in their days to come❤️

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:32

Jan 09, 2026

To:sarahxaa

Nooooooo I'm sorry. I was trying to be wholesome😭

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:47

Jan 09, 2026

Thank you everyone for reading The Spotlight's Shadow. I hope you enjoyed Jun and Akari's journey❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:47

Jan 09, 2026

To:sarahxaa

They got their happy ending😭❤️and they shall continue to happily live their ordinary lives together❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:47

Jan 07, 2026

Sobbing😭I feel so bad for her. She knew what she was getting herself into with this show but it doesn't lighten the blow any less and there's no guarantee that this will help her image either. Even though that's the role she's supposed to play, I can't imagine how much that negativity would affect someone's mind like that😭The reality is she's a sweetheart that's thinking about other people even though they said mean things to her😒looking at you Senri

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:9

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

Thank you❤️She's been running from who she really is for a long time, but now she's having to face it so the reality is settling in on her. Hopefully the rest of her past intrigues you just as much❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:7

Jan 06, 2026

To:Casha

You wrote this perfectly well in my opinion. It feels right and wrong. Understandable but frustrating. Makes me sympathize but also mad. It's nice to see mr. perfect not being perfect and that makes him more human and realistic so that's also good too. I really look forward to seeing how this plays out but I should be studying lol, so I'll read more when my exams are done❤️

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:8

Jan 06, 2026

To:TheLeanna_M

Thank you. I'm glad the emotion came through😭It's sad she's saying goodbye, but she always wanted a quiet life and hopefully she'll get that❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:46

Jan 06, 2026

To:Katanistra

Thank you❤️Glad you enjoyed it. Hope the rest of it interests you too!

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:8

Jan 06, 2026

Emotional rollercoaster that was. I understand Senri but at the same time who is he to judge when he doesn't know her or the context. You can't ask someone to explain their pain and then throw it back at them, that doesn't make you any better😭 Like it makes sense but at the same time he knows how much his sister got hurt from the bullies, so he should also be able to tell how much Nataria is hurt by looking at her. The line of "or punishing someone who'd already been punished enough" was a very nice addition, shows the conflict of the thought. Was just not expecting him to turn so quickly😭

Hide Me In Your Heart

Chapter:8

Jan 05, 2026

To:Sakura Mazaki

Thank you😭❤️this was harder to write than I thought so I appreciate the comment

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:46

Jan 05, 2026

To:Casha

Both Jun and Akari are haunted by their past and therefore feel a sense of familiarity with each other. We shall learn more about them both and they'll open up more too❤️And yes Jun is the male lead, hopefully you can grow to like him and enjoy their story

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:6

Jan 03, 2026

Kaoru is having too much fun performing lol
Yasu speaks so elegantly❤️loving his character more and more

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:13

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