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Jan 21, 2026
Nooooo stoppppp😭this was such a sweet chapter, I don't want to know what your last line implies😭
We finally going to see Shou's true side?👀Interested to see more about his character and what's to come Also excited to see what Nataria does for his birthday and how Senri is going to "make it possible"
I love the back and forth with Hibiki and Nataria, really shows their bond. Also Hibiki and Sachiko, another canon ship I see👀
Was not expecting ShouSen tbh. Idk why but if there was going to be a male ship idk why I thought it'd be Senri and Hibiki😭
To:Nato_otan1
Yeah I contemplated which ending to go with and ended up with this one since I thought it was cute❤️
Ahahah nooo he's not creepy I swear😭
I'm glad to hear you find him smooth cuz when I be writing it I am stressing lol
Of course they would twist the narrative to enhance Senri but take down Nataria🙄It's nice to see all of them banning together though to handle it. Also I love that Hibiki and Shou can tell. I was wondering if it was as obvious to them as it is to us readers lol
Really cute last chapter and story overall. I really like Yuna's growth throughout the whole story. From the beginning until the end she grew stronger and found her peace, which was really nice to see❤️good job
Jan 20, 2026
Senri being jealous I didn't expect from his kind personality but I love it and it works so well🥰I very much love that he's not circling around his feelings or running, he's acknowledging them and choosing to face them
Also the part with the food description had me going🤣I don't even want to know what they created
To:D. Hazane (羽實)
Once I finally caught up, I tried to read whenever you updated. Of course, overall I enjoyed the story. It also somewhat reminded me of this one anime I watched when I was younger so personally I got a sense of nostalgia as I read too. Ahaha don't worry, it happens. I'm sure my story has grammar errors too. Especially commas😒my worst enemy. If you do lmk your thoughts❤️
WHAT?!? NO😭I didn't expect him to get taken out like that😭
This was a really interesting read full of emotions and ups and downs. I also like how it's an open ending. Sad and bittersweet but also quite fitting for the story. Overall, I really enjoyed it❤️
I knew the twisted ankle was coming but I was not prepared for what came next😭🥰He carried her and talked to Mr. Bun and kinda basically confessed like omg I'm spinning this was so enjoyable
Screaming🥰Ahahah I was not expecting her to touch his dimples but I love that. I love every time she lets her real self slip through and not her ice queen persona self.
Squealing during this chapter🥰Senri watching her in the kitchen and imagining her leaning on him and stuff eeeekkk. Can't wait to see them work together and the tension form even more
It's nice to see people support Nataria and not those cruel comments. I continue to hope she gets more support😭 It's also really nice to see Senri's growth of when he realized he stopped doing this for money and because he actually wants to. Considering how hard he's worked for his sisters, he too deserves to do something he wants❤️
"a puppy that keeps running into glass doors"🤣I cackled Also Senri staring at Nataria with his "Yeah, it's really nice." I see what you're doing😏 Overall, a really great chapter to really showcase each character as well as the dark side of fame. Can't wait to see what they come with all together