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Dec 18, 2025
To:Sakura Mazaki
Hopefully a good confession😭harder to write than I thought it would be Thank you for pointing it out❤️
Dec 17, 2025
Yes there a lot going on I this chapter😭 Thank you for pointing all that out, I'll correct it❤️
I like how you wrote this part not in a dramatic way but more of a straight to the point. Really showcases the atmosphere and reality of the characters
This took a turn I didn't expect. Can't wait to see the direction you go with this❤️
To:Crys Meer
Once he accepts his feelings, he's not going to let anything else get in his way I'm glad he came off as smooth though😭cuz I was sitting here writing like uhhh
To:sarahxaa
Ahaha thank you❤️
Dec 16, 2025
My only critique is that you would put some words in caps but end the sentence in a period. For example, "NO WAY." - I feel like the punctuation should be an exclamation mark to match the intensity of the caps. Other than that, really fun chapter. Loved seeing the family dynamic ❤️
The chapter title took me out, but then the actual chapter took me out even more🤣
To:TheLeanna_M
Guess we'll have to find out👀
Hopefully a good ride😭
Those are very wise words❤️Love them
Thank you😭Hope it wasn't too difficult to process❤️
Very true❤️
Ahaha that's so silly but to be fair I've gotten paint on the back of my head so it happens😭
Oh no not an anger flare up😭but yes there's definitely been a lot of emotions going around lately Thank you for your advice, it also sounds better❤️