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Dec 15, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Ren's jealous side might be nice to see though👀

Spotlight

Chapter:21

Dec 15, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Well I'm glad I help make it bearable❤️I think it's so cool though that you're able to be in Tokyo though
Can't wait for you to read it❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:34

Dec 15, 2025

To:Katanistra

Don't worry, it happens to all of us❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:3

Dec 15, 2025

This is very heavy and I'm sure it'll be a difficult read, but in a good way. I hope it wasn't too difficult of a write for you.❤️ I look forward to learning more about the story and hope to see some healing for Aika😭

Called To You

Chapter:0

Dec 15, 2025

The only thing I saw in this chapter was: "He said he'd take responsibility. That he loved me. That we are a team."
I think it should be "That we were a team." To match the flow of the rest of the phrases being in past tense.
Very excited to see what's next though❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:3

Dec 15, 2025

To:sarahxaa

You flatter me😭❤️Thank you so much

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:34

Dec 15, 2025

To:sarahxaa

Long awaited date finally coming😭

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:34

Dec 15, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Nooo not the train again😭Yeah the letter made me emotional to write honestly so I'm glad to see the emotion was felt through it.
Ahaha happy to hear the ending of this chapter got you excited❤️hopefully I can meet your expectations

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:34

Dec 15, 2025

I love that you've included a variety of different yokai. Very curious to see where this story goes❤️

I Will Arrest the Yōkai that Killed My Parents

Chapter:2

Dec 15, 2025

To:Crys Meer

Hopefully other youkai will be nicer to him😭
Can't wait fr your next upload ❤️

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:9

Dec 14, 2025

Poor Yuame😭how dare the tengu bully him. I'm glad he has Kaoru by his side at least. I just hope he doesn't take the insults too much to heart😭

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:9

Dec 14, 2025

What happened to Julian😭

THE GHOSTWRITER

Chapter:22

Dec 14, 2025

To:Katanistra

Thank you. I'm glad to hear it has your feeling hooked, hopefully that continues throughout the story.
And don't worry if you don't see any mistakes as I'm sure someone else will point them out too lol. But if you do see anything to work on or suggestions, I'm always open to hear it.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story❤️

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:1

Dec 13, 2025

"Luna gave me a glance. I shouldn't have said that."
Did I miss something? Who's Luna?

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:2

Dec 13, 2025

"I just want to hear my mom scolding me again for not eating enough."😭I know it's a simple line but it made me sad
Anyway in terms of feedback, most of my points align with what was already said. Mainly your punctuation, which is easily fixable so don't get discouraged about it.
My only other critique is that you use the phrase "I said" a lot throughout the chapter, which can feel repetitive and also disrupt the flow of the story. Don't get me wrong, you can still use that, but a little variation would help avoid it sounding too repetitive.
I did enjoy your first chapter though. I'll try to catch up soon❤️

The VTuber Next Door is Pregnant

Chapter:1

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