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Jan 19, 2026

Good lord I didn’t think I was going to get as invested in this story as I have been.

Jiro has amnesia, Airi might be part of a scandal.

And now I’m hungry from the mention of fried rice and hot dogs.

HIRED AS A GHOSTWRITER FOR AN ENIGMATIC HEIR

Chapter:7

Jan 19, 2026

A nearly transaparent nightgown? Oo la la. 😄

But seriously, I feel like a monkey butt about Airi.

Losing your parents? Yeesh. That’s rough.

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Chapter:6

Jan 19, 2026

A proposal eh?

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Chapter:5

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

In for penny, in for a pound. I have to find out now.

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Chapter:4

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

Geez, I don't really don't know. Ever since I was a kid really, starting off with writing stuff on paper. Now I have at least a dozen USBs full of stories that I have written privately for my own enjoyment, never published.

I used to do a lot of collaborative fiction back when bobturkee.com was a thing. And I've kind of bounced around boards here and there.

I've more or less recently gotten into Eastern based media, especially Light Novels and such with Vampire Hunter D series being my first dip in that pool.

Then I ran across Honeyfeed and got major nostalgia for posting stories on boards and stuff again so I gave it a shot.

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Anyway, enough of me rambling. Back to what you were talking about.

Every writer does indeed have their own style. Like I've told someone else on this site before, the key thing is that *you* enjoy the story first. And then merely share it with others. The right (and like-minded people) will find your medium and consume and engage in it.

If you keep that frame of mind of writing what you enjoy, how you enjoy it, you'll be able to tell your stories in the form they naturally need to be in, rather than trying to do something that goes against your grain.

Improving your craft is great and all over time, but without your passion the story doesn't have that breath of life, that spark that draws readers in.

AIRRASAGA - Tale of the Boarheart

Chapter:3

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

You mean Caerth?

Yeah, he's a scumbag. Not too bright either considering Karga isn't the pushover he thinks she is.

AIRRASAGA - Tale of the Boarheart

Chapter:3

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

It's a "yes and no" thing though. Descriptions of the characters can be good but you got to be careful not to dump too much and break the momentum of the story.

You don't want the reader to forget what was going on by getting too hung up on be super detailed. You also want to have confidence in your reader that they have an active imagination and will paint their mental image of the character themselves.

It's a bit of a balance. And it's one I've struggled with and continue to struggle with. So don't feel like you're alone when trying to seek that balance.

Right now I try to sprinkle the appearance of the characters here and there. Allowing the reader to build and/or confirm their image of the character over time.

For example we know Brithun is an orc with a mustache (Prologue Chapter), Cragath is a rather portly but muscular orc (Prologue Chapter), Baldomar and his brother look the same but one has long hair and a beard and the other one doesn't. And so on and so on.

The characters in your story, I have a picture of already in my head. Based your descriptions and (key thing here) depiction of Airi, I kind of think of her as the average protagonist in most East Asian media, sweet, somewhat innocent, probably bobcut or long straight black hair, brown eyes and a clear, heroine complexion.

Jiro, my main man, is an absolute unit and gigachad and you can't convince me otherwise.

AIRRASAGA - Tale of the Boarheart

Chapter:3

Jan 19, 2026

*Airi

Damn this autocorrect.

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Chapter:4

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

Ha, of course! I'm sounding a little insensitive to our MCs plight.

I'm uncertain of Aira at the moment though, you got me wondering, especially with the twist if there is something up with her lol.

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Chapter:4

Jan 19, 2026

Brilliant twist and hook at the end.

I was beginning to think things were almost sailing along too perfectly, and that ending makes me want to find out more.

Well done!

But Jiro seemed like a pretty chill dude. I hope nothing happened to him.

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Chapter:4

Jan 19, 2026

I’m getting the impression this get together was Jiro’s idea…

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Chapter:3

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

I will! When I get off work I’ll try it out and report back!

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Chapter:2

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

Unfortunately my first thought goes in a darker direction with “The Blob” lol.

AIRRASAGA - Tale of the Boarheart

Chapter:1

Jan 19, 2026

To:Anime lover

The most important thing is that the story is fun and entertaining for you. After that the right people come along and enjoy it with you.

If you don’t enjoy your work, you can’t really make it come alive.

And for me, I have another story to read in my off time from work!

Looking forward to it.

Final Chapter : FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:0

Jan 19, 2026

To:Idle Mind

Slimes are not of the cutesy variety in this world I’m afraid lol.

AIRRASAGA - Tale of the Boarheart

Chapter:1

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