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Sep 07, 2025

Looks like I’m going to get invested in this one. So far you have me hooked.

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2025

Ah, Kazuo.

No rizz, only cheese.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:13

Sep 07, 2025

So, Kazuo has found a patron and mentor in Setsuna. Or, is he merely a piece on the board?

I wonder as this story goes on if the old adage plays true…

“At the end of the game, both the King and the Pawn go back in the same box.”

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:12

Sep 07, 2025

Shaking hands with the devil Kazuo?

You know what they say of Faustian bargains.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:11

Sep 07, 2025

To:Ribal Husein

🤫Ok

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:10

Sep 07, 2025

To:Ribal Husein

No worries. Stuff happens.

For example I couldn’t spell properly just a moment ago lol.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:8

Sep 07, 2025

A face-to-face with Cedric, finally.

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Does the elemental affinity also affect eye color or is it just bloodline?

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:10

Sep 07, 2025

Pity Kazuo can’t control the temperature of the water he conjures or this fight might have went into a completely different direction.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:9

Sep 07, 2025

An underworld full of life rather than ruin? Yet not at all welcoming.

It’s not hard to see why Kazuo feels the way he does.

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Just a minor suggestion to consider. If you switching a scene or character POV, a page break keeps it clean.

I almost though Kazuo was our hooded stranger for a brief second lol.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:8

Sep 07, 2025

Indeed, what does she mean?

Will she be friend? or foe?

Or maybe a future mentor?

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:7

Sep 07, 2025

I see Kazuo might be walking into a game of cat-and-mouse.

Let’s see how this goes…

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:6

Sep 07, 2025

Kazuo seems deep in it now…

Also, I have a new eye color for the chart.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:5

Sep 04, 2025

To:Idle Mind

It’s a foundation laid at the very least. Something to build upon should you decide to take it up again.

Never a wasted effort when it comes to these sorts of things.

Maribeth: Half Sister

Chapter:3

Sep 04, 2025

To:Ribal Husein

Many thanks. I’ve been making some notes on the side thus far to keep track, so I’m pleased to see I can collect some more lol.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:3

Sep 04, 2025

Garden conspiracies are the best conspiracies.

Out of curiosity is the full spectrum of eye colors and their associations revealed in their entirety within the story?

It’s a very interesting piece of your world building.

Shinkai - The Eyes That Shouldn't Exist

Chapter:3