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A student of wordcraft, breathing life into worlds that exist only in the mind.

registered at: Sep 02, 2025

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Sep 08, 2025

It’s never a sin to be born in the dirt. But it’s a terrible sin to want to stay there.

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Thrilling so far. Am I about to witness a phoenix rising. Or must I endure further empathetic hardship in anticipation. I suppose I should read the next chapter…

The Heracle's Diary - My Story in Another World

Chapter:1

Sep 08, 2025

Ah, reuniting with dear friends.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:15

Sep 08, 2025

So Kazuo is powerful but untutored fighter. I wonder how he’ll fare with some training.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:14

Sep 08, 2025

Very well written so far. First person is especially difficult to pull off without sounding monotonous.

You should give yourself more credit (referencing our conversation in my story). By my first impression you are a very adept wordsmith and your character already has me hooked with their "gift for the gab".

I've got this in my library now and I'm looking forward to what comes next!

The Heracle's Diary - My Story in Another World

Chapter:0

Sep 07, 2025

Looks like I’m going to get invested in this one. So far you have me hooked.

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2025

Ah, Kazuo.

No rizz, only cheese.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:13

Sep 07, 2025

So, Kazuo has found a patron and mentor in Setsuna. Or, is he merely a piece on the board?

I wonder as this story goes on if the old adage plays true…

“At the end of the game, both the King and the Pawn go back in the same box.”

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:12

Sep 07, 2025

Shaking hands with the devil Kazuo?

You know what they say of Faustian bargains.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:11

Sep 07, 2025

To:Ribal Husein

🤫Ok

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:10

Sep 07, 2025

To:Ribal Husein

No worries. Stuff happens.

For example I couldn’t spell properly just a moment ago lol.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:8

Sep 07, 2025

A face-to-face with Cedric, finally.

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Does the elemental affinity also affect eye color or is it just bloodline?

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:10

Sep 07, 2025

Pity Kazuo can’t control the temperature of the water he conjures or this fight might have went into a completely different direction.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:9

Sep 07, 2025

An underworld full of life rather than ruin? Yet not at all welcoming.

It’s not hard to see why Kazuo feels the way he does.

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Just a minor suggestion to consider. If you switching a scene or character POV, a page break keeps it clean.

I almost though Kazuo was our hooded stranger for a brief second lol.

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:8

Sep 07, 2025

Indeed, what does she mean?

Will she be friend? or foe?

Or maybe a future mentor?

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:7

Sep 07, 2025

I see Kazuo might be walking into a game of cat-and-mouse.

Let’s see how this goes…

Shinkai: The Eyes That Shouldn’t Exist — Season 1

Chapter:6

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