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Jan 26, 2026
To:Mai
IKR? There’s a lot of love there.
Giles. But has been just as influential to Oto’s successful trending life!
Mai! The one who’s name is definitely not…
O stands for Only the best for…
ALRIGHTTTT!!!
Alright???
Hue hue hue hue hue…
So many layers to this comment, hahaha
Hayami: Are you saying I’m dumb? How could you. Oto: I learned this from watching you! I learned from you!
I love these little moments of “okay, wait, hol’ up”
God. I missed your fight scenes. As always sooo good! I loved the usage of the space. The uncertainty. The power and choice to harness the environment to an advantage. Awesome job!
Fucking nose! And Lemmy, screw those guys!
And that piercing bolt was sick, what a cool usage of a spell. Slower but more powerful. Absolutely sick. Hazama is definitely a force to be reckoned with!
Damn! What a crazy moment. I mean, a little creepy at times. There’s definitely some moments of Hoshino being lucky he’s pretty or you know, regular police may have had some questions—haha! But in all honesty it was a great moment. I had been wondering how the butterflies tied into this and you brought it together with a nice bow. Excellent job! And then there were the descriptions you gave. Some beautiful moments narrated here both of the world around the characters but also the emotions they shared with each other. It was powerful and compelling. Really giving Hoshino this humanity moment that had been teased at over several chapters! And of course the little bits of comedy you do so well at sprinkling in with every moment. Going so far as to throw in deez bunz after so many chapters.
You have a unique way of doing mystery. I usually have an idea by now of what the end goal is but youre keeping me on the edge of my seat, so bravo! I love the idea of bouncing a bolt around like a blursed pinball until it finally strikes someone. What a unique and chaotic way to use spells, which tracks for the theme of the story. Chaos. Youre also doing well to keep up the suspense with every chapter and tie things back to previous chapters (loved the shout out to Jerome Incident which probably has its own file now).
This is a very intense chapter. Well done Gurg. There’s no intense magic or blood fight scenes but you capture the horror of bullying so well. It starts out well. Funny. Awkward. Watching porn at work for the plot. But you quickly shift into something more raw and painful. It was so twisted and leant so well to what you have built into this story. And showing how each character responded differently to the same video. Mmm, chefs kiss.
Amazing job!
There is definitely a lot of love and emotion behind their words. It’s just neither of them truly understand it yet.