Rex

Rex

It's fun to write.
The covers are a pain to make though.

My comments tend to get harsh & heated sometimes when talking about certain points in stories. I apologise in advance as I mean nothing bad by it to you personally, just me beefing with whatever part of the story I'm in at the time.

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    Aug 21, 2026

    Here with the regularly scheduled Uriel review as my comments here are slowly turning into that funnily enough, sorry again.

    Though before that, did you mean to write practical contact? Or was it meant to be Physical contact?

    Anyway, I see he's trying to be a little nicer thanks to him realizing he screwed up and almost got her in hot water. At least that's what I got from the one thing about principles, that he recently acquired one thanks to that or something. Though it seems that only made him screw up again by almost accidentally undressing her, though on that... How did that work? He decided that instead of listening (which is really what he should try doing more of instead of "practicing principles"), that he would change the position of his hands, eventually deciding on the belt, but if the hands are on the belt (I assume is where they are given what was written) then how did the belt loosen to make loin cloth fall? Don't get me wrong I'm glad he got the hands back on the hips after realizing his screw up, but I'd think the belt would just be more secure you know?

    Another thing is the difference between hips and waist, this might just be my understanding but they're the same thing aren't they? Or pretty much the same place but with the waist a little higher than the hips. I guess I just confused myself on how exactly she has the belt, using the cover as a guide I don't see one there, well who knows.

    Lastly what he said there of her "may actually know something" was definitely an insult in my opinion.

    I'm glad he wasn't as annoying this chapter. He's actually trying to be a little nicer, that's good. This was nice. Shame that she might potentially have to leave some things behind though, well assuming they don't win vs the humans or that he doesn't help her out by also carrying a bag himself.

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:4


    Aug 20, 2026

    Good on the elves for not wasting anything, shame he couldn't stomach it.

    Once again Nimiwa remains likeable, she's very cool, but unfortunately Uriel was quite an asshole this chapter too not gonna lie, I feel like he's becoming more and more annoying and unlikable, at least for me. Like was he expecting a buffet in this random little settlement in the middle of the forest? Though I guess being angry at the surprise of it is fair enough, but demanding they straight up just become herbivores, I guess, is crazy because technically that IS what he said. After all if a boar is running away desperately from your attacks, then it is definitely it's way of saying to "not eat me", and technically all creatures speak, just in their own way, so in my mind he just demanded they become herbivores, crazy stuff. I kinda hope they don't listen to that, just to stick it to him (and also because I do think not wasting anything is quite nice), but I know they will unfortunately.

    Another crazy thing was him saying he walks, he can sure try, the only thing that's going to happen is he gets thrown in there, I'd imagine that'd be what would actually happen, that or break his legs and then throw him in, in any case it would not be him being killed or anything like he tried taunting.

    Once again Uriel made me annoyed enough to have a comment mostly complaining about him, and once again I hope you didn't mind. Hopefully he can at least become more tolerable to read through later. (Had to remake comment to fix some typos, sorry about that)

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    The Heretic Red Mage
    Chapter:3