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霞 Kasumi

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Sep 27, 2026

To:rhedak

Thank youuu!
Kasumi will get some rests before enjoying the participants novels~~

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:43

Sep 25, 2026

To:houtai dazai

Right, rightt!! Both of them are cute in their respective wayss~~

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:12

Sep 01, 2026

To:houtai dazai

Ask Rita, not the author lol

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:6

Sep 01, 2026

Yes. But even I, the author, cannot control what those characters' voices. So I let them be who they are for now.

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:5

Sep 01, 2026

To:houtai dazai

Hahaha, it is not that surprising, isn't it? I actually wanted to write in my own style (higher tension and more gore setting) but I want everyone to enjoy the story so I reduced it to an acceptable level :))

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:3

Sep 01, 2026

To:houtai dazai

Hi again and thank youuu for coming here. Be happy on reading the title, everything is there xD

After my artillery brigade was annihilated, I will become the best magic barrier user in the hero's company to save the world

Chapter:1

Aug 11, 2026

The sentences are well made!
The story finally flows in this chapter. One little comment: i cannot follow who is who, yet 😭

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:2

Aug 08, 2026

Kasumi likes the atmosphere building. It seems like reading 'Shiki' novel but from the first person pov. A bit personal suggestion from Kasumi (Kasumi herself is still new on novel so maybe Kasumi is wrong), you should not hold back while writing, write every voices that you hear from your characters.

Kasumi means that your story is already alive, the atmosphere is very well set, but sadly Kasumi cannot hear the voices of your characters, yet. For example, from scene like "feeling something that isn't there on my hip", you could voice it more like, "where was that?" Kasumi thinks that you are writing first person pov by placing yourself as the third person, so the feeling is a bit off.

Over all, it is a great story. Kasumi cannot wait to see what's behind the mist~

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:1

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