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Nice to meet you. I am a reader first before a writer. Feedback on my works is welcome (even being read itself is amazing, haha...)

registered at: Jul 18, 2026

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Oct 09, 2026

Congratulations on finishing. I am a sucker for a happy ending story, so I might be biased, but this is such a heartwarming story from the very start to finish. (Un)ironically I have to say that the mystery engine in the earlier chapter is among my favorite. The favorite part is Annette of course. It's not exaggarating to say that she has a quite kind of epic. You render emotion and interaction between people with vivid interiority. Annette, Prince Henry and Luvan especially have distinct voices with memorable moments. Thanks so much for writing

Sorceress of Four Seasons

Chapter:37

Oct 09, 2026

I learned how to write jealousy from this chapter. Thank you.

Sorceress of Four Seasons

Chapter:25

Oct 09, 2026

Wow, I guess this is the epicness part of Annette. I like the mystery engine on this and the previous chapter. :)

Sorceress of Four Seasons

Chapter:10

Oct 09, 2026

The pace is fun. Alexia and Sostrates are my favorites. Kraken and all the pirate shenanigans pump me up fair dinkum.

Inventive Power!

Chapter:50

Oct 08, 2026

Anthurium's plight was clearly rendered. This has interesting world-building and a different take from the regular prompt. I am curioud what'd Anthurium vote.

The Weight of One Grain

Chapter:1

Oct 08, 2026

To:SnarkySiren

Thanks so much for reading and meeting my characters!☺️

The Royal Physician Has Given Up!

Chapter:1

Oct 07, 2026

A fight that ends without a killing always brings warmth and smile.

The Mythic-Level Saint Just Wants to Run Her Orphanage

Chapter:20

Oct 07, 2026

I must say that I am perplexed that this work was written by the same author who wrote Amazing Chest Ahead. Board game or not, you wrote the remnant of Sassanid Kingdom so vividly, it feels like I am being transported back in time. I am not going to comment about the historical aspect. I think this work is something they'd call a "palate cleanser." It's the most literary thing I read this week. I learned a lot. Thank you for this.

Losing My Religion

Chapter:3

Oct 07, 2026

What a douchebag, Ludwig. So many fish! Thanks for writing an aquatic story.

Siren can't sing

Chapter:17

Oct 07, 2026

From the way you write it, I can tell you have an extensive world-building. Haine herself is written like a 12-year-old should be. The twist and the sacrifice landed. You mentioned in your notes about ESL but the prose is dynamic and it definitely didn't make your readers stumble as much you might think. What carries are the characters and how Haine reacts at them.

Yselvrias Chronicles

Chapter:20

Oct 06, 2026

Mary is sweet and awkward, and that's how she gets me. I have to disagree with previous commenter; Ragnar's appearance shows me the story is beginning to turn (I only read this far, though).

From Empress to Commoner: The Former Demon Queen's Quest for a Peaceful Life Begins with Becoming a Hero

Chapter:15

Oct 06, 2026

I came after I read Kalyptos, and I found Meran's distinctiveness of characters' emotion stood out even in Meran's earlier work. The concept is unique and I really like how Asteria made you want to support her.

The 1,000-Year Shut-In Vampire's Guide to Modern Heroism: "What is a CEO? What is this World? Just Leave Me Alone, Please!"

Chapter:23

Oct 06, 2026

Hoshi's action geometry and describing how the protagonist's motive and thinking process are smooth as usual. 😆

Witness to Fleeting Moment

Chapter:3

Oct 06, 2026

I like your take about the treasure hunt to how to trap someone to get the treasure. You have an expansive world-building, with dynamic vocabulary. The humor lands and Strep is one strong character.

Amazing Chest Ahead!

Chapter:3

Oct 05, 2026

There are so many interesting things that I don't know where to start... your characters have distinct voices and Agnes especially took the readers' affection quickly. Most of all, I can tell (or can't tell) how much research the author put about the era. Definitely will continue to read this. Thanks for the unique, original angle.

The Plague Doctor & The Littlest Sister

Chapter:9

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