Jul 06, 2021
Oh man, I'm a little jealous of the writing here.
Maybe it's just me, but you excelled the mark when it comes to a sad story, especially with two new characters who we don't even know. It was a very great way to introduce the character and a very great way of starting a story such as this, and for that, I like it.
Do keep it up, because this is a great concept! It's eye-catching!